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Date Posted: 23:19:49 05/12/03 Mon
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Tam
's message, "Can you mark the composition for me, please? (and give me a grade)" on 22:37:59 05/12/03 Mon
>2003 CE GE syllbus B (the first topic)
>
>
>Dear Editor,
>
>I am writing to express my opinion on the question:
>“Do you think your parents really understand you?”
>As a teenager, I think I am lucky to have parents, who
>understand me; however, a lot of parents do not
>understand their children very much.
>
>First of all, I think many parents do not like their
>children to stay out late with friends. I know they do
>so because they care and worry about their children.
>While teenagers like to stay out late with friends,
>especially in the festivals, like Christmas. So I
>suggest they should have a compromise. The parents can
>give a mobile phone to the teenagers so as to call
>them at any time. The teenagers should tell their
>parents when they will go, whom they will go with,
>where they will go to, and when they will back home. I
>think the teenagers should keep their promise, in
>particular, when they will come back, or the parents
>may not let them stay out late again.
>
>Moreover, I think a lot of parents like to know what
>their children spend money on and give advice to them.
>But many adolescents do not like their parents always
>asking how they spend money. One of the reasons is
>that the young people think that they are “young
>adults” thus they can decide how to spend money. I
>think parents should give some advice to them, like
>they should buy the “non neccessary things”, such as
>accessories, clothes and dolls less, and save some
>money. I do not think the parents will not allow or
>have argument with them if they buy the “must-have
>items”, like stationary or reference books.
>Therefore, adolescents should be self-descipline.
>
>Furthermore, a lot of us like spend a long time on the
>computer nowadays while parents do not like. Many of
>us spend a lot of time on the computers to play
>computer games, and some of us use the computer to
>search things or do homework. Therefore, I think
>parents should ask their children why they always
>stick on with the computer. If they play computer
>games, parents should suggest them to play less, since
>it may damage teenagers’ health. If they use the
>computer to search things, parents should support them
>and give them some advice on how to plan a better time
>table.
>
>To conclude, many parents do not understand their
>children much. It is because of the lack of
>communication, and some of the adolescents do not let
>their parents to have an opportunity to understand
>them. Therefore, communication is very important.
>
>Thank you for your attention.
>
>Yours sincerely,
>C.Wong
mark:22+23=45
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