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Date Posted: 18:34:52 05/13/03 Tue
In reply to:
Ive
's message, "Re: Can you mark the composition for me, please? (and give me a grade)" on 23:19:49 05/12/03 Mon
>>2003 CE GE syllbus B (the first topic)
>>
>>
>>Dear Editor,
>>
>>I am writing to express my opinion on the question:
>>“Do you think your parents really understand you?”
>>As a teenager, I think I am lucky to have parents, who
>>understand me; however, a lot of parents do not
>>understand their children very much.
>>
>>First of all, I think many parents do not like their
>>children to stay out late with friends. I know they do
>>so because they care and worry about their children.
>>While teenagers like to stay out late with friends,
>>especially in the festivals, like Christmas. So I
>>suggest they should have a compromise. The parents can
>>give a mobile phone to the teenagers so as to call
>>them at any time. The teenagers should tell their
>>parents when they will go, whom they will go with,
>>where they will go to, and when they will back home. I
>>think the teenagers should keep their promise, in
>>particular, when they will come back, or the parents
>>may not let them stay out late again.
>>
>>Moreover, I think a lot of parents like to know what
>>their children spend money on and give advice to them.
>>But many adolescents do not like their parents always
>>asking how they spend money. One of the reasons is
>>that the young people think that they are “young
>>adults” thus they can decide how to spend money. I
>>think parents should give some advice to them, like
>>they should buy the “non neccessary things”, such as
>>accessories, clothes and dolls less, and save some
>>money. I do not think the parents will not allow or
>>have argument with them if they buy the “must-have
>>items”, like stationary or reference books.
>>Therefore, adolescents should be self-descipline.
>>
>>Furthermore, a lot of us like spend a long time on the
>>computer nowadays while parents do not like. Many of
>>us spend a lot of time on the computers to play
>>computer games, and some of us use the computer to
>>search things or do homework. Therefore, I think
>>parents should ask their children why they always
>>stick on with the computer. If they play computer
>>games, parents should suggest them to play less, since
>>it may damage teenagers’ health. If they use the
>>computer to search things, parents should support them
>>and give them some advice on how to plan a better time
>>table.
>>
>>To conclude, many parents do not understand their
>>children much. It is because of the lack of
>>communication, and some of the adolescents do not let
>>their parents to have an opportunity to understand
>>them. Therefore, communication is very important.
>>
>>Thank you for your attention.
>>
>>Yours sincerely,
>>C.Wong
>
>mark:22+23=45
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