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Subject: Re: 唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀


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Syllabus B candidates
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Date Posted: 22:03:26 05/08/03 Thu
In reply to: cherry kam 's message, "唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀" on 02:20:01 02/19/03 Wed

quite a lot of mistakes =.= fail
I am writing to complaint about The purpose is use for students to study in here. Now, it lost the usefulness I was disappointed in the environment, because when I studied in the library.< no need to say because...say "that" will instead of the will be better
Firstly, the boy, sat on my near, listened the CD-ROM, < sat nearby, listened to the CD(revised)
but the volume was very strong< the volume is large
Seriously, he also used a pen to beat out the music I used the unfriendly expression of the eyes to him, And the librarians were not stopped his behind. Although they were discussed their homework, but they didn’t quiet to talking. << after although cant say but =.=
I known that study is true but they should control the volume. One of the library rules is keep quiet on every time, and the librarians were not stopped their behind.< wow........too many mistakes i wonder if u can pass
comment:
1.care about tense
2.care about passive and active voice
3.ideas couldnt be expressed
4.note about forms of the vocabulary

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Re: 唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀Syllabus B candidates22:11:28 05/08/03 Thu


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