A Must Read!!! Great story with wonderful well-worded imagery and great fun!!! (r) -- The Writer's Alternative

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Subject: A Must Read!!! Great story with wonderful well-worded imagery and great fun!!! (r)

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Kitkat (CathyR)
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Date Posted: 14:37:58 03/28/01 Wed
In reply to: Sanlin 's message, "Chapters 17-19 (The End.)" on 11:52:07 03/28/01 Wed

Sanlin,

What can I possibly say that has not already been said? The piece is truly great. The plot is imaginative, flows nicely, and holds together until the last period is placed.

Your writing has real power, an intangable that many strive for but few are able to achieve. I know that prose is not your first love, but I would encourage you in that direction simply because the genre certainly loves you.

You have the ability to visualize the scene and then, through use of effective imagery and a innate sense of pacing, make that scene real to your reader.

Keep up the good work!
Cathy, Bethany, and the girls (you know from the seriousness tone of this comment that Beth is most certainly looking over my shoulder)LOL

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Aha... You again. LOL {{{{{{Kitkat}}}}}} I'm going to have to make you my publicist if you keep making these sweet comments, I hope you realize. ;-D (r) Sanlin 15:16:44 03/29/01 Thu

Hey Sanlin! I'll accept the job of your publicist any day of the week! (r) -- Kitkat, 08:07:05 03/30/01 Fri

Actually, Kitkat... (r) -- Sandra Lindquist, 18:31:59 03/30/01 Fri