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Date Posted: 05:21:23 04/06/04 Tue
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's message, "FEEDBACK THREAD (PLS STATE EP TITLE IN POST)" on 12:14:57 04/04/04 Sun
This must be a VKMax board, it's so clean. Does anyone leave feedback here?
*mess,mess,mess*
Souls, by Gemma
He hits the sign? Hehe. At least Faith won the bet.
Joe knows William? He was introduced as Spike. Ooh...Ominous.
(Where did that word come from?)
Is that the real Willy. Oh, yes it is, bar and all.
Angelus? Uh-oh. That'll take me hours to read the other eps to
find out how he got that way. Wouldn't want to miss a 'moment of
true happiness' scene. Ooh! Gus Lane is an anagram of Angelus!
They're not doing it? VERY unFaith-like. Where's Buffy? Spike
doesn't act like he's still with her - meaning with her that way.
"Ain’t getting’ any action here it appears." could have double
meaning, but I think you give it only one.
You would mention IRS bills. It's that time here and I have only
a week to finish ours. Grr Arrgh.
Bad acting? At least Faith and Spike are clued to the trap. Did
Willy expect them to go anyway? That's their reputation and the
way these stories usually go.
"Must be a lot of RM haters out there" *Raises hand*
Near the end of part two, it sounds like Joe wants out of this
mess. His instruction how to use the gun seem like he doesn't want
to any more.
Aww. Angelus tips the anagram. I'd take the Faith and not even
think of Spike, but then I'm a guy.
William's human? Arrggh. Gonna have to read back now. Maybe
after my IRS forms are finished.
What's the rating here? This is a little slashy:
"Angelus:
I’m so hurt. Never heard you complain did I?"
and
"But please DO remember this position for later."
Angel's human, too???? Arrrggghhh.
Interesting reaction to seeing himself dead: "Bugger"
Very Spike.
Ooh! Pure souls go right through walls. Why did Spike slam into
the stage?
Low blow from Faith to get Spike to fight.
" He’s right he’s better than you."
Spike seems to want Faith so much, but all she does is knee him?
Is her attitude explained in earlier eps?
The stand-alone begs to be finished. Angelus is to precious a
character to let go at that. Think of all the fun you could have
with him ... and Spike ... and Faith. *Stops thinking now.*
All through this ep, the characterizations of Faith and Spike are
fun to read. You do a great job with them. This is the fun Faith
of AtS and I like her. I can understand how it's part of the
story, but she has SPIKE, of all men, all over her and she's still
not getting any.
Spike is well characterized too. He'd try to save Faith like
that, relate to Angelus like that and be just that snarky. His
blatant hitting on Faith is as much fun to read as her reactions.
Really fine, Gemma. This may just be what gets me hooked on this
series.
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