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Date Posted: 20:05:30 05/25/01 Fri
Author: luke
Subject: Woo. Crazy different. Dum dom dum drum beat. Do a little dance. Turns things a bit on their head, quite a different poem now, introducing a 'she'. Sounds cool, I think it's better but I'm not sure. It's hovering near silly.
In reply to: tim 's message, "luke, zeina... I have tried to end Tiger moon better... see what you think, if the last stanza is crap let me know!! ;) (it was quite hard to write!" on 15:01:41 05/25/01 Fri


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[> haha. I agree. maybe a bit silly. I like the do a little dance analogy... -- tim, 20:11:40 05/25/01 Fri

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