Date Posted:00:56:27 08/23/01 Thu Author: zeina Subject: wow. i really liked this actually. i was all enthralled with my face right up to the screen when i read it!!!! a few odd moments like 'pee' and my daddy he... but i really liked this. the actual rhmye rhthym thing is amazing. its got such a little melody in it. actually the rhthym makes it for me. if it didn't have that i'd probably hate it but still i love it now. In reply to:
luke
's message, "I feel very embarrassed putting this up especially with the stupid 'pee' rhyme but it's the only thing I've managed to finish" on 18:16:16 08/21/01 Tue
