Chapt 60 Q1) A vivid description that's not overblown or too much yet covers all of the senses really helps to draw me into the story and the lives of the characters. When I can close my eyes and "see" the setting, I know the author has done an outstanding job. It also helps me to put the characters into context, rather than having them floating in a generic setting. -- Cindy's Cottage

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Date Posted: 14:56:12 10/11/07 Thu
Author: Carla
Subject: Chapt 60 Q1) A vivid description that's not overblown or too much yet covers all of the senses really helps to draw me into the story and the lives of the characters. When I can close my eyes and "see" the setting, I know the author has done an outstanding job. It also helps me to put the characters into context, rather than having them floating in a generic setting.
In reply to: Tracy 's message, "Mermaid in a Bowl of Tears ~ Part 5 ~ An Aran Idyll" on 17:35:10 10/10/07 Wed

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Q 2) Hell yes, it was too short! I suppose in the interest of moving the narrative along the author had to bring their time-out-of-time to an end, but she could have said something like: "And they boinked like bunnies for two more months before falling prey to yeast and urinary tract infections." and leaving the details to our smutty imaginations. Unfortunately, these breaks from real life seldom last long enough, whether in real life or fiction. (NT) -- Carla, 15:00:32 10/11/07 Thu

LOL! I like your way with words chickie! Hmmm..maybe we can get Cindy to work that line in for the next book? Seriously, I like your answers . (NT) --

Tracy, 15:03:36 10/11/07 Thu

ROFL Carla 'boinked like bunnies'!! I myself could've used a little more of the vivid description our wee author is soooo good at! Hey maybe she could just write a seperate erotica novel for us that can't get enough *BG* (NT) --

Marilyn, 15:19:45 10/11/07 Thu

Mahri, would you survive the novel?!?!?! (NT) -- Tracy, 16:03:07 10/11/07 Thu
I'd make you all sign a waiver before you read it. It could come with a little shamrock seal that reads- 'Open at yer own fecking risk.' (NT) -- celtgirl in Cali, 18:01:34 10/11/07 Thu
- And that's not to say such a thing doesn't already exist in bits and pieces. ;) (NT) -- celtgirl, 18:04:20 10/11/07 Thu
  - *THUD* (NT) -- Marilyn, 18:29:14 10/11/07 Thu
  - I think you need to share those "bits and pieces". I'm strong, I can take it. (NT) -- Carla, 19:34:57 10/11/07 Thu

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