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Date Posted: 20:44:32 05/17/04 Mon
Author: Hillary
Subject: The Final Four
In reply to: Hillary 's message, "WU Review" on 20:23:37 05/17/04 Mon

What's In A Name: This might be a recurring sketch for you, I don't know. But for me, it's difficult to follow without background, and everything just seems kind of random. I did think "If Halle Berry was a pie, what kind of pie would she be?" was funny. Well-placed random moments like that can work, but if a sketch is a bunch of randomosities cobbled together, it often doesn't.

Rumsfeld: To make fun of celebrities/political figures, you have to either exaggerate a characteristic they have or establish an expectation about their behavior and break it. Rumsfeld breaks the expectation from the very beginning, and you just repeat it in the sketch.

Double Trouble: Well, it's good that you took a predictable premise and made an unexpected swerve. I'm not so sure that killing the guy would really be so funny, however. Abrupt ending, as well.

Jay-C: This is just gross. How does "shaved eagle" correspond to "vagina"?

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Replies:

  • Re: WU Review -- Jim Bevan, 20:55:37 05/17/04 Mon
  • Sheesh, don't apologize -- Hillary, 21:20:47 05/17/04 Mon
  • Jim's idea for a future president -- Jen, 21:42:31 05/17/04 Mon
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