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Subject: Poetry

Author:
Alvin

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Date Posted: 23:01:37 02/19/05 Sat

Dear Theresa and Denise,
I just joined a poetry forum (www.poetryfriends.com) and submitted my first composition there. Any comments from you? Please be brutally honest if needed... I want to improve on it.

Oh, I actually sent it to TS first before sending it to the poetry forum. It was specially for her, composed within 15 minutes after reading her email to me about a college assignment.

Blessed Be,
Alvin

SOMEWHERE IN TIME, MY DEAREST FRIEND

Time and again
We know not the end
Eternal companions, eternal friends
Crossing our paths
Like DNA's twinning spiral
Nurturing each other, timeless forever

Time and again
As lives goes by
Experiences lived, how time really fly
For thee, my spirit sing:
I'll unite with you again...
Somewhere in time, my dearest friend

:)
Alvin

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Poetry	Denise	11:50:11 02/20/05 Sun
Correction: I meant twine is broken, ok? -- Denise, 16:29:19 02/20/05 Sun Re: Correction: I meant twine is broken, ok? -- Theresa, 01:35:29 02/21/05 Mon Yes, the silver cord. -- Denise, 12:19:04 02/21/05 Mon Re: Poetry -- Alvin, 17:04:13 02/21/05 Mon

Re: Poetry	Theresa	01:32:51 02/21/05 Mon
Re: Poetry -- Alvin, 07:38:07 02/21/05 Mon Re: Poetry -- Theresa, 02:52:18 02/22/05 Tue Re: Poetry -- Alvin, 05:51:38 02/22/05 Tue Re: Poetry -- Alvin, 06:15:57 02/22/05 Tue Re: Poetry -- Theresa, 22:07:36 02/23/05 Wed Re: Poetry -- Alvin, 06:23:56 02/24/05 Thu Cancer Story and Heart Story -- Alvin, 06:35:32 02/24/05 Thu Re: Poetry -- Theresa, 22:01:28 02/23/05 Wed Re: Poetry -- Denise, 18:56:06 03/07/05 Mon Another Poem -- Alvin, 15:57:47 03/04/05 Fri Re: Another Poem -- Denise, 18:49:02 03/07/05 Mon Yet another poem -- Alvin, 05:50:29 03/06/05 Sun

Re: Poetry	Theresa	22:10:49 02/23/05 Wed
Re: Poetry -- Theresa, 22:17:11 02/23/05 Wed