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Author: Theresa |
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Date Posted: 01:32:51 02/21/05 Mon In reply to: Alvin 's message, "Poetry" on 23:01:37 02/19/05 Sat Dear Alvin, A poet and a scientist. See how talented you are! I also write. But I mostly write songs and short stories. I have written poetry and plays. I do like your poem. I love how you express the eternal bond of twin souls. I love how you portray your Earthly relationship as being friends. Then you take it from there and say it is eternal. I love the image of the twinning spiral. I would only correct a couple of words. In poetry, you can get away with a lot. But some things such as subject-verb agreement call for being stricter. So I would change " fly " to " flies " and " sing " to " sings. " Did you know " Somewhere In Time " is a film with Christopher Reeve and Jane Seymour? It is a cult classic. And it is Christopher Reeve's favorite film. It is a very beautiful film about twin souls and time travel. There is a poetry section in TSE. Will you be sharing your poetry with us there, too? I would be honored to see more of your poetry here. Love And Blessed Be, Theresa [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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| Re: Poetry | Alvin | 07:38:07 02/21/05 Mon |
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| Another Poem | Alvin | 15:57:47 03/04/05 Fri |
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| Yet another poem | Alvin | 05:50:29 03/06/05 Sun |