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Subject: THIS BOARD IS NOW CLOSED> FOLLOW THE GREAT HALL LINK FOR THE NEW BOARD.


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Tangle
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Date Posted: 14:17:11 10/27/07 Sat


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Hermes and Laceleaf
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Date Posted: 03:04:34 10/27/07 Sat

Checkpoint!

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter Six


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Geminya and Kaylar of AA
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Date Posted: 23:04:33 10/14/07 Sun

After the tragedy, the rebels following the squirrel heir that had been prophisised to defeat the tyrant were split. She had withdrawn greatly and many had left to carry out small acts of defiance with their own beasts. Oiltongue had no great troubles and lived well for two seasons.

As for Roseapple, she lived a half life. Only Spearstream, she permitted to enter the small dray in the willow tree and even then he was sometimes cast away by her. But one day was different.

She stood at the window of her small dray. Watched night give way to day. As the sun rose, it framed her in its light. Her light brown fur, normally kept short and neat but was now long and coarse, was outlined in the beams. Every spike, twist and lock. Looking at the shadow she cast on the wall, she drew her knife.

When Spearstream came cautiously to the door that noontime, he was alarmed to hear not a word spoken, bidding him to come in or casting him away. Worry lines puckered around his forehead as he gently pushed the door open, fearing the possibilities that might lie inside. As the door slowly creaked open, he beheld Roseapple sitting on a stool facing the window. Her fur was neatly trimmed. The claws resting on the nearby table looked sharp. Her tail stood erect and bushy. Setting the basket he carried on the floor near the door, she rushed over to her, fearing he had come too late. As he came around the table, he noticed one very odd thing. Her knife lay on the floor nearby, in a neat pile of fur. Roseapple turned to face him, a new light shining in her eye. He drew in his breath. She looked as she had before the ill-fated invasion of Redwall. Was all he seeing, was it a spirit?

Roseapple, seeing the alarm on the otters face, spoke. “Hello Spearstream. How goes the defiance of Oiltongue? It has been a long time since I have been in command. How far have we scattered?”

Spearstream tried to hide his astonishment by answering quickly. “Well, the molefolk reside in Moledeep, they haven’t been discovered. The mice and Caterina are with them. The rest of your squirrels have vanished into the Mossflower Canopy as wanders, not stopping in one place for too long. The otters and the hares have left for a long ways away, the otters to the seashore caves and the hares to the northern mountains that Oiltongue came out of. We have scattered far and wide. But they will all rise up and follow you, if you’d only come back to life.”

“Aye, my friend, I have come back to the land of the living. It is time for me to take my place, first as the leader of the rebellion, then as the restorer of my dray. Only then will I be at peace. Spearstream! Bring the rebellious to the light again. We mustn’t waste another season!” As he left, she turned to the fragment of glass that served her as mirror. She saw the pain in her eyes, but saw the fire that outshone it. Her paw, absentmindedly rose to trace the scar left by Oiltongue’s blade on the eve of Elmtree’s death. Oh well, this wasn’t the time for reflections. She rose and walked to the cabinet that held her weaponry. Slinging a bow and full quiver over her shoulder, she buckled the belt carrying Elmtree’s sword around her waste. She would carry it until Oiltoungue had gone to the Dark Forest or she had. Whichever came first.

She left the little dray in the willow, never to return to it again. Walking through the treetops, she reached the entrance of Moledeep. Inside, Caterina was arguing with the Foremole about extending the tunnel system. Around her she could see many creatures crowded into the small spaces. A few creatures noticed her and disappeared into side tunnels where very soon eyes where peeking out form and whispers drifting nearer. Striding up to the mouse she had come to know quite well, she asked, “Why expand the tunnels?”

Caterina was so amazed she almost dropped her jaw. “We haven’t heard from the hares or the otters and we’re a bit worried. The overland journey is too risky for many inexperienced creatures to make so we’ve lost contact.”

Roseapple nodded. “Okay, as soon as Spearstream gets back I’ll take a select crew out and discover what is happening. Foremole, you have your crews start tunneling now, we might need to flee fast or move creatures to or from here.” The moles immediately emerged from the tunnels they lived in and headed towards an unused wall to start the job. Within a few hours, creatures from all over Mossflower woods poured in and all of them wanted to see Roseapple. With Caterina’s help, she told them where to go and soon the tunnels were filling up.

When the last beast filed in, she went to the tunnel directly behind her. All of the beasts there had not unpacked. Their weapons were out and being checked for flaws. Squirrels stung their bows and checked their quivers. A few otters loaded heavy river pebbles into their slings and checked their pouches. All around her all manner of beasts honed all manner of blades. This activity stopped as she came into the room. “Friends, I have not been true to my word. As I freed each one of you, I said I would put you above myself. I have not done that, Oiltongue has reigned two seasons longer than he should have, because I drowned myself in self-pity. Now I have come before you to ask you to risk life and limb for me again. I will need a score of well trained and equipped beasts who have some idea of the way to the shores of the Western Sea. There we will rally the otters, search for the hares in the northern mountains and crush Salamandastron. The rest of you will remain here and train the others as well as guard the place. You will follow Caterina and Spearstream. They will, upon receiving word of our assault on the mountain, begin the assault on the surrounding outposts. When we have joined forces, we will march upon Redwall!” Her voice was strong and rang true. A score of warriors stood, four otters, two hares, four mice. Ten of the party were squirrels that had traveled that way, running from the border patrols. After she told them to gather weapons and food she noticed a squirrel standing near her. He was one of the very first to volunteer. Walking up to her, he asked if she would accompany him to a quiet spot at the back of the cave.

As he sat on the small ledge that served as a bed, he began to speak, words flowing from his mouth as a spring in the thaw. “My name is Oakfoot, brother of Elmtree. He liberated me from the Hemlock dray and promised me that we would fight together in time. But then he chose to go to Redwall with you. He never came back alive.” Here the squirrel’s voice cracked. “He told me that if something ever happened, if he died fighting for the rebellion and I lived, that he loved you with all his heart, that he would follow you to the dark gates if he must. Then he made me promise that he’d look after you, no matter what happened. So all I’m trying to say is that I will always be willing to serve you. No matter where it takes me, I will serve you.” She was crying and so was he. As they stood and wiped her tears away she said, with fiery passion. “I will avenge your brother if it kills me. You shall be forever remembered as Oaktail, brother of Elmtree, Guardian of the rebellion!” With that they parted to see to travel preparations and did not speak of it until the journey began.

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  • Chapter Seven -- Geminya and Kaylar Streamrudder of AA (tired), 01:13:23 10/27/07 Sat
Subject: Check


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Hermes and Laceleaf
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Date Posted: 21:34:17 10/25/07 Thu

Checkpoint!

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Subject: Redwall No More?


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Brookie
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Date Posted: 00:10:58 10/19/07 Fri

Chapter Seven
Back with Onyx Flameclaw's horde, Onyx was getting angry. She had told her fighters to hunt around for food. What did they bring back? Some berries and roots. Barely enough for two beasts. She stood in front of the scringing group. "What where my orders for you fools!?" She kicked one of the group, a stoat. "You! Answer." The stoat bowed low, " M-majestry, youse ordered us'n's to 'unt furr sum vittles." She kicked him to the ground, savagely. ''And what did you bring me back?! Some shriveled berries and tasteless roots!" Her face was purple with rage. "That is not vikkles! That is not fit for the Horde of Onyx Flameclaw! You are a lousy, louse bitten, lazy, lucrative, lot!" She smiled a small slit of a smile, "I will let you live, however. Bring me some scoff that you can actually eat!'' She turned to back into her tent. "Do not fail me! There will be harsh consequences if you don't obey!" She returned to her tent where Dharku was waiting. "Why am I served by brainless idiots?" she asked, talking more to herself than Dharku. "I ask them to bring back some vittles and all they bring is food fit for woodlanders!" Dharku comforted her smoothly, his voice like oil sliding on a frying pan."Onyx, majesty, that is why you are in charge. Without you they would be like chaff on the wind." Flameclaw considered this for a moment. "Yesssss, you are right." And she settled down to sleep.

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Subject: The DAB Split


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Sunset and Tiffie of GG
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Date Posted: 13:51:25 09/16/07 Sun

What the story is about:

A horrible time for all dibbuns. The DAB split. Every dibbun lived in terror that another was to tag him. They all slept, wondering…would they be tagged in their sleep? Would they be bathed and in a clean white smock sititng in the attic of Redwall bored to death and trying to prevent the fighting tomarrow? Every DABer lived in fear. They all wanted the fighting to stop. But they didn’t want to admit pure defeat. The two sides would scowl at the mention of the other side, and if they found an opponent that could beat them, flea. They were being cowards. No one admitted it, but they all were cowards during that time. They needed Tangle. But you’ll read on more about what happened…

Prologue: A Mad Dibbun:

All was quiet. The sound of sleeping dibbuns, snoring and grunting, filled the dormitory. There was an occasional murmur of a dibbun talking in his or her sleep, but other than that, you could hear a pin drop slowly and hit the floor. The slow rhythmic creak of the shutters blowing in the wind was also a sound heard. It was very dark, and a dibbun couldn’t see a paw in front of their face.

A loud creak suddenly filled the dibbuns’ ears. A few sat up and fussed with their eyes, trying to see who made the noise. But soon, sleep overcame them and they fell over into a deep slumber. The creak had been made by a dibbun. It was a very black mouse. He blended in with the darkness excellently. Snickering to himself, he scoffed as the dibbuns lay their head down again. Shaking his own cranium, he slowly reached into a pocket in his black tunic, pulling out a large dagger. His eyes filled with excitement, he slowly slid towards Tangle’s small feather bed. He was going to do it.

Tag Tangle Tumblehog, Ringleader of DAB and main dibbun. He smiled evilly. The only reason he was doing this wasn’t something to brag about. He worked with the EAD, Elders against dibbuns. They were rewarding him with no baths, and all the candied chestnuts he wished to stuff in his mouth. He actually wished to join DAB more then anything. But he didn’t want to become the disliked weird dibbun that worked for the EAD . He wouldn’t be accepted. He wasn’t wanting to join for the fun, he wanted to become ringleader himself, enslaving all dibbuns to do all his work for him.

Of course, all the dibbuns had denied him and tried to tag him when he attempted to attack Tangle in broad daylight. He was known as the crazy dibbun, and his name was actually pretty true. He was quite mad, and was very good friends with other evil dibbuns, like the shadow band. He was also son of an evil dibbun as well. Of course, that dibbun was now an elder, and wasn’t as evil anymore. But, it’s time that we get back to the story.

Holding his precious dagger with both paws, he tiptoed up to Tangle, and saw her shadowy form in the darkness. His red eyes rolling madly, he uncovered her slowly, looking at each point on her body. He suddenly squinted with excitement, then more madness…what a horrible thing to have! His head started madly shaking and his paws too. His whiskers twitched and his tail waved in the air. He was having another madness attack. The elders usually gave him something to stop the madness, but he wouldn’t attack Tangle if he was on whatever they gave him. His eyes wide, he whispered.
“Bye bye Tangle! Hello me!”

He waved frantically at Tangle’s form, then plunged the knife downwards. He patted Tangle, who had grunted in her sleep as he had begun the process of tagging her. Nodding, he reached into his haversack, the click of the shutters hitting the walls slightly scaring him. The black mouse slowly pulled out a note, then, at the end of it, smudged a word. He was playing a joke on all the DABers. He was smudging the name of who should be the next leader. Shaking his head and shaking with silent mirth, he jerked away from Tangle’s bed, but accidentally left a bit of fur on the floor by her.

The young mouse tiptoed out of the room, and took one last look at Tangle’s bed, where Tangle had poofed from to get a bath and try and stop the fighting in the attic.

“So long!”

Then, he hopped out of the dormitories, and down the steps. After that, he tiptoed through a few halls, using a torch to find his way around. The mouse finally found the abbey doors. He escaped them, then crawled around to a tunnel. Smiling and still shaking madly, he crawled down into the dirt, which got into his paws and on him. Underground was cold, but he didn’t mind. The smell was unbearable though. It smelled like…dead bugs and…decaying leaves. Soon, the tunnel rose and he hopped out of it. Then, he stepped into the shelter of the Shadows of the Mysterious Mossflower Wood.

“Oh, you DABers! I will be hiding, and watching how you tear yourself apart for me! When I’m left with the strongest dorm, that’s when I and my…friends will step in! HAHA!”

(I'll post the next part in the next post)

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Subject: Check


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Hermes and Laceleaf
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Date Posted: 15:58:36 10/23/07 Tue

Checkpoint!

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Date Posted: 22:30:55 10/22/07 Mon

Checkpoint!

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Subject: Marlfox Attack: Part 1


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Snowflake
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Date Posted: 01:24:04 10/20/07 Sat

OOC: this is like the sequel to "Marlfox".Mokkan and the others have had ancestors who appear in this.

BIC:

"No beast defys Mokkan's ancestor! I am Komman the Marlfox!" Komman shouted. He was the leader of his crew, made mostly out of Marlfox ancestors and water rats. "So, where are we going?" "Redwall! Redwall Abbey!" his horde shouted back. "Let's go!" Komman pointed north. He hung back with his sister, Rizal to talk. "So brother. Do you feel confident about this? Are you sure about this, I'm just not sure. Remember what happened to Mo-" Rizal was cut of abruptly by her brother. "Don't remind me sis. there is no room for doubters in this crew." Komman made sure everyone got the point by making this announcment. "Do you doubt me? If you do, you'll never defy me again. Just like this one." he turned and killed a water rat. Everyone got the message. The Marlfoxes were on the move.

Swordling ran like a breeze past Snowflake. "Whoah! What's the hurry Swordling?" Snowflake asked. "My warrior senses are kicking up, Snowie." Swordling replied. "Well, you ain't going alone, wot." Jakken Swiftpaw walked up. "Yeah Swordling, I'm comming too." Mossyra said. "Wait. We can't ALL go." Snowflake commented. "Yes we can, Snow." Mossyra replied annoyedly. "Fine. Just be careful!" Snowflake gathered her few daggers and her sword. Everyone was nervous. What kind of evil is abrod in Mossflower? The Dibbuns were just about to find out....

OOC: Like it? We always welcome new story people.

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Subject: Thunder: A Tale of Redwall


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Snowflake & Thunder (happy to be together)
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Date Posted: 00:22:58 10/21/07 Sun

Prologue:

Who sneaks like a snake? THUNDER!
Who speeds like lightning? THUNDER!
Who fights like no ones buissiness? THUNDER!
THUNDER!THUNDER!THUNDER!

Who wants revenge? Firesword!
Who's clever than a Marlfox? Firesword!
Firesword! Firesword! Firesword!

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Subject: Check


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Hermes and Laceleaf
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Date Posted: 13:46:35 10/20/07 Sat

Checkpoint!

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Subject: Redwall War--Part 1


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Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 22:58:37 09/14/07 Fri

Mossyra stared blankly at the dead bodies lying sprawled in the dust. So many dead and even more missing. She felt like there could be a hope if only the Tapestry was brought back. But for now she was content to sit and wonder how many had died for freedom.
A few hours later Mossyra's best friend, Swordling, and her brother, Jakken, came up with packs and staves.
"Come on, Mossyra," Swordling said, "It's time to hunt some vermin." Mossyra looked up and blinked. "You're going to find them?" Jakken grinned. "Nope. /We/ are going to get them. Come on!" Mossyra leapt up and sprinted toward the Abbey, calling over her shoulder, "Hang on, I have to get something." Swordling and Jakken exchanged puzzled glances, then shrugged almost in unison. "We'll find out soon enough," Swordling muttered, shifting her pack to a more comfortable position.
Mossyra snatched her healer's pouch and staff from a small corner and hurriedly filled a pack. On her way back out, she passed Tangle and called, "Tangle, we're going after the vermin!" Tangle stared after the retreating squirrelmaid and muttered, "Why would you go after the vermin? They already killed enough in my opinion."
Soon, three figures were vanishing into Mossflower on the trail of a remnant vermin horde. They knew other Redwallers were scattered through the forest and they were ready to collect as many as possible to destroy the vermin forever.


Raiden stumbled and dropped a small bit of cloth on the ground before regaining his feet and quickly catching up with Samkin.
"It's planted," he murmured. "Tell me when I should put the next part of the trail down." Samkin nodded absently, his eyes half closed in concentration. "Maybe we should try to gather a few weapons," Samkin muttered. I only have a few daggers on me. Swords last, I should think, along with bows and arrows. Those are hardest to hide." Raiden's face fell. "Then how am I supposed to kill vermin," the mouse demanded. "I can't do more than three without some kind of weapon and I don't know where I could hide daggers. Certainly not on my person." Samkin shrugged. "If something comes up where you can carry a sword and not be noticed, I'll personally steal your sword for you." Raiden sighed, missing the comfortable weight of his sword by his side, and mentally promised himself that he would fight until every last vermin in the encampment was dead.


Mossyra and Swordling stayed stock-still in the undergrowth as Jakken silently slipped ahead. Somebeast was crashing through the trees and they needed to know if it was friend or foe. Mossyra noted that the wind had died completely. Birds were silent and insects made no sound. The forest was deathly still and totally silent except for the cracking of twigs and the snapping of branches. Without warning a wordless shout came from ahead, followed by a large crack and total silence. Swordling and Mossyra jumped forward with no hesitation, moving effortlessly through the forest where the sound had last come from, eyes alert for any movement.


Lissi muttered under her breath as she nearly fell and pulled at the ropes binding her paws. They made it hard to stay in balance; Samkin, Raiden and the rest appeared to have no trouble, even if Raiden did stumble from time to time. She let her rudder crack a branch and smiled inwardly. The vermin were careful enough not to leave a trail now, but she was leaving less noticeable signs that beasts had passed this way. Added to the pawprints and scraped mud that were occasionally missed by the pair of ferrets covering up the backtrail, a multitude of broken sticks, bruised leaves, trampled plants, and scraped trees showed anyone with half an eye that a great horde had passed through. She chuckled quietly to herself as a stoat blundered straight into a low branch. Soon they would escape or be rescued, and when that time came the vermin would be sorry they had ever heard of Redwall.


Swordling and Mossyra burst into a small clearing and were confronted with an odd scene. Three weasels, obviously just killed, were scattered across the empty space while a badger and Jakken watched one another suspiciously, each waiting for the other to move first. When the squirrel and mousemaid arrived, the hare and badger turned to face them. Swordling instantly recognized the badger.
"Tinsy," she exclaimed, "What are you doing here?" Tinsy Stormsight blinked in surprise and replied, "I'm searching out the remaining vermin and helping any lost survivors. What are you doing here?" Swordling shrugged. "Nothin' much. Just searching out several hundred vermin to single-handedly kill every one and rescue a few captives. Want to join us." Tinsy nodded thoughtfully. "I guess you could use some help. I mean, at least seven are needed to take down that many and every little bit helps." For a moment the four companions stared at each other. Then they burst out laughing.


Lettuceleaf's ear twitched slightly as they picked up the sound of hearty laughter. Ready to fight, he slipped as silently as a shadow toward the sound despite a slight limp. Fiddling with his blowpipe, he readied a thorn and peaked around a tree. And blinked in surprise.
A squirrel, a mouse, a hare, and a badger stood laughing in a small clearing, obviously very amused. They didn't notice him at first, but soon he saw the squirrel glancing in his direction. A moment longer and he recognized them.
"Hello," he said cheerfully, steeping out from behind the oak. "You seem very amused about something. May I ask what?" Mossyra and Jakken merely nodded at him, but Swordling and Tinsy were truly taken aback. The mousemaid had her sword out before she even saw him and Tinsy tensed as if to jump the moment she heard his voice. Then she realized who it was and grinned sheepishly. "Hello, Lettuceleaf," Mossyra began, and finally noticed his injuries. "You're hurt," she cried, reaching for her healer's bag. "It's nothing," he muttered, "Just a bit of bad luck." The look she gave him could have cracked stone. "If you continue much longer you'll pass out or die," she growled, "Now hold still so I can bind them enough to travel with. Especially that cut on your head." Swordling chuckled. "You'd best listen to my Mossy. She's got her warrior spirit aroused."


Raiden smiled as he carefully wrapped a piece of cloth around his waist. He had finally thought of a place to keep his sword and Samkin had kept his word; a few minutes past midnight he handed the fieldmouse his wooden weapon and told him to hide it. Now he was ready to march and happier than before.
He quickly dropped a piece of cloth on the ground before moving forward, just as he and Samkin had planned it; one every morning, one every night, and five other times in between. It was quite effective as the vermin didn't seem to notice, but everybeast was starting to get impatient. They wanted to escape and they wanted to do it now. But Lissi cautioned them to wait, saying they had a better chance deeper in the forest. Raiden feared soon one of the captives would escape on their own and put the rest in mortal danger. Of course, they were too smart for that, but you could never tell. And even Lissi was tempted to start killing vermin right then and there, though none would admit it openly. Everything was failing. Just as well it was all according to Samkin's complex plan, else they might have been lost long ago. He had his doubts about one of the prisoners, a young stoat that claimed to be good. He had been captured long before the horde came to Redwall, and Raiden suspected he was too frightened to try and escape. He might betray them, given the chance, but they were having trouble hiding what they were doing from him. Sooner or later, he would suspect, and when that day came it might be only a matter of time before the vermin learned of their plan. Could they trust the young stoat or was he a traitor, ready to do anything to please his captors? It was a matter of friend or foe, and they couldn't afford to have a foe.


Mossyra poured measured amounts of herbs into the cup, then stirred it with a twig and passed it to Lettuceleaf. "Here," she said calmly, "Drink this. It's gentian root and motherwort cordial. It will help ease the pain." After he had downed the drink, she added, "And it'll make you sleep." The hare choked on the last mouthful and stared at her disbelievingly. "What!? You tricked me!" Mossyra smiled. "Yes, I did. We all need some rest, you most of all." Without warning she turned to her smiling companions. "Come on, get some of those physics into you! We need to be ready to march and that cordial will help." As they drank, Swordling asked, "Mossy, what's in it?" She took another sip. "Why, gentian root and motherwort, of course. What else?" They all spluttered on their drinks and Mossyra grinned. "I'll take first watch until you wake up, if no one objects. Good night."

Raiden frowned at the body before padding back to the others. The stoat had been traitor after all, but they were escaping now. He hadn't been much of a fighter, either.
As he passed Lissi, she nodded at him, indicating that the way was clear. It would swift and decisive, then. Twilight darkened the woods and vermin already snored by their fires. Any minute now.

Lissi nodded at the fieldmouse as he passed her, then watched the trees for Samkin's approach. His coming would signify that the sentries were asleep forever. After all, no one could alert the others that their prisoners were escaping. Any minute now.


Mossyra and her rather angry, if well rested, friends snuck up on the vermin camp at about the same time Raiden was disposing of the stoat spy. Unfortunately, Tinsy, with her badger bulk, snapped a twig. Just a twig, but it alerted the entire camp of their presence.

Samkin silently slipped his dagger free of the ferrets heart and listened intently. A twig snapped. He gasped and turned to scramble up the nearby tree, but it was too late. A heavy paw grabbed him and jerked him backwards. His head connected with a low branch and darkness came.

Tinsy stared guiltily at the limp squirrel in her paw. "Oops. Sorry, Mossyra. I didn't realize I was that strong." Mossyra grinned as she bound the minor wound on Samkin's head. "That's okay. It's more of a bump anyway, so he'll be fine. Well, he might have headache, but that doesn't count for much." Lettuceleaf appeared from the darkness carrying a small dart. "I found this over there aways, wot. Seems to be a dead weasel over there too, but he's so swelled I can't be certain." Mossyra took the dart by its plumage and studied it carefully. Without warning, she laughed. "Why, it's one of the poison darts Samkin makes. I don't know where he got the idea, but he puts snake venom in it. Very effective. By the way, did you taste it or anything like that? 'Cause if you did, you're dead." The hare shook his head. "No, but I heard a sharp cry from over thataway," he gestured toward where he had come from, "and found a dead stoat. I'm taking a wild guess and saying Raiden got him. Bet you twelve CCs they're escaping tonight." Mossyra grimaced. "I hope not. Otherwise, we're in trouble."

Meanwhile, a vermin scout hurried back to camp to deliver his news, unaware of the eyes following him as he vanished into the darkness. A dark form slithered out of the tall grass after him, making no sound at all as it hunted.

"Deathssssss shall come thissssss night!"


The scout never made it back to camp. He had almost reached it when he felt a light jab in his footpaw. Surprise lasted only a moment, then the venom did its work. He fell heavily, but made no sound as he crashed to the leafy ground. His sword, however, flung forward as he toppled and slashed through a tent. The occupants woke up and hurried outside in time to see three dark figures on the opposite side of the camp springing away. Unaware of their dead companion behind them, they ran after the escapers, yelling and shouting as they charged blindly through the camp.

Raiden grunted in surprise when the slingstone hit him and fell hard, stunned. Lettuceleaf, trailing just behind the mouse, saw him fall and rushed over.
"Come on, Raiden, just a bit farther," he growled as he dragged his friend behind him, attempting to hurry. The frontrunners of the vermin had come close by then, though, and he dropped the semi-conscious mouse, grabbing Raiden's sword as he fell and ducking into the undergrowth.
The first vermin to arrive, a weasel, felt a light sting as the poisoned dart embedded itself into his neck, no more. Lettuceleaf stepped out of hiding just in time to meet the next three vermin, a fox and two rats. Realizing it was too late to use his blowpipe, the crafty hare swung Raiden's sword clumsily, trying to hit the fox in the stomach.
But the fox was experienced in the art of swordplay and easily dodged the awkward blow. Seeing an opening, he stepped forward and swung his sword hilt, almost lazily.
Thunk!
Crack!
A deadly dart caught him in the shoulder, instantly killing him, but his attack landed and Lettuceleaf was knocked unconscious, The blowpipe falling from his lips as he tumbled to the ground.
The two rats, undecided on what to do, leapt into action as a ferret came running up and ordered, "Take these two back to camp while we look to the rest! Hurry!"
Unblinking eyes watched from the shifting shadows of the forest, waiting for a chance to get at the dead vermin.

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Date Posted: 21:34:05 10/19/07 Fri

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Subject: Redwall No More?


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Brookie, Pebble, & Amber
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Date Posted: 15:58:20 10/01/07 Mon

Redwall No More?


Prolouge

Ah, you're here. Close the door and warm yourself by the fire. Listen to the tale of a horde of blood-thirsty vermin, bent on taking over the Abbey of Redwall. A tale of Dibbuns, trying to prove to the Elders that they are old enough to go into Mossflower Woods alone. A tale of misery and woe, kindness and caring, death and life. Listen my child, to a tale of Redwall.

Chapter One

A group of rag-tag vermin huddled around the fire. Trying to shield themselves against the harsh, biting winter gusts.
There were many fires in that camp that night, but this one was the most important. A short, gray water rat stood, and spoke:
"Ah'm tired orf o' dis nonsense. We'll neva make it ta dis Re' wall place! Wha does Flameclaw 'ave ta go thar? I's crazy! E'ry beas' dat gose thar doi's. 'Asn't she 'eard o' Cluny da Scourge? Skished boi a bell so 'e was. An' doze Marlfoskers, kill'd orf alla 'em! Dis is crazy, I tell's ya! Crazy! We're all gonna..." He trailed off, for right beside him, was Onyx Flameclaw herself. Her axe struck flesh. Blood spurted everywhere. She side-stepped neatly out of it. "This 'un was lucky," she growled, "The next who I hear cumplainin' I gonna make it a lot slowah! Do annah of ya bumblin' block'eads wanna join this lifeless lump, eh?!" She paused dramatically, her eyes scowling. She looked around as is searching for something. Her eyes settled on a large ferret. She motioned for him to come up, "All beasts gather 'round!" she roared, catching the vermin off guard.Scores of hordebeasts came closer to the fire. "Slan," she commanded," Recite that Rhyme of Redwall you told me not three days past." Slan looked nervous, but recited the Rhyme in a sing-song voice:

"Riches, silver an' gold,
mountains of treasure untold.
All sorts o' things ta behold,
at the H'abbey o' Redwall!

There be nice food,
an' diamonds many hued.
Lotsa pretty pearls ta be viewed.
At the h'Abbey of Redwall!

There be a sword o' magic,
hid 'hind then walls of brick!
but beware! The inhab'tants are full o' dirty tricks,
That's the H'abbey o' Redwall!"

The vixen smiled slyly and voiced her thanks: "You have a nice voice, Slan. Don't you see, friends? The Abbey has wondrous riches of all kinds! You lot can have it all, providin' you all still wanna come. Get a good night's rest, we march at dawn." She marched off, followed by her two captains, a stoat, Oakrose, a red badger, Bull, and her advisor, Dharku. She paused and looked over her shoulder, "Dharku! Send me two good scouts, on the triple!" She retreated to her tent.

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Date Posted: 22:22:11 10/15/07 Mon

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part twelve


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Riverstream Wildlough & Treeflyer AA (not sure what dorm Treeflyer's in.)
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Date Posted: 23:12:10 10/08/07 Mon

As Skipper watched the vermin retreating down the path he muttered, " scum." Then, leaping up, he shouted," bring a stretcher!" When the otter crew came back out, they were carrying a stretcher. Opening the gate, they lifted the ottermaid onto the stretcher. Carrying her inside, they brought her up to the infirmary where Sister Poppy was taking her breakfast as she always does. " Well, well. What happened?" she asked. " Horde of 'bout fivescore chasin' this one." replied on of the ottercrew." She fainted clean out." " Well I'll take care of her." They watched for a little while as she worked her paws over the unconciuos otter.



When she finally came to, she was lying in a bed in a strange room. There was a mouse standing a little ways away. " Where am I?" she asked. " In Redwall Abbey." She lay there, considering what the old mouse had just said. While she lay there, there was a knock on the door. " Come in." called the mouse. The door opened and a squirrelmaid about the same age as her came in.



Back at their camp, the vermin were nervous. Goldenblade had called a meeting at dusk. Every creature in the camp ecxept the slaves knew reason for this. Dusk fell. All fivescore vermin were assembled in the center of the camp. The circle around Goldenblade was almost three deep. Clearing his throat he began to speak. " You all let a slave escape. We chased her halfway and then some stupid ol' otters threw a few stones at us and you cowardly lot reatreated! I almost had her and then you all ran off like a bunch of babys." His voice rang out like steel against stone. " Huh, then who shouted retreat?" muttered a stoat. Goldenblade drew his sword and signalled to his top captain. Holding the sword infront of him he begain backing the stoat up. The top captain held his spear ready. As the two made their way through the gathering, everybeast moved out of their way.

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter Five


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Geminya and Kaylar Streamrudder
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Date Posted: 00:28:44 10/09/07 Tue

Chapter Five

Roseapple and Elmtree walked silently about the slave dorm in the abbey attics. Picking a chosen few slaves, they grabbed a rope from the eaves where Roseapple had hidden it and looped it over a stony protrusion on the abbey wall. As they rappled to the orchard floor, they small band was careful not to make a sound. If they were detected, it would mean the uncovering of almost a seasons work.

For just under a season, Roseapple and Elmtree had been taking a small bunch of slaves to the underground tunnels leading to Moledeep where the rest had their headquarters. Only half a score had been liberated so far, guards and other problems owing to the little progress. Elmtree and Roseapple were often seen whispering together and all of the guards thought it was young love among the slaves. The two rebels didn’t discourage the rumor, why should they? They truly were in love. An unspoken understanding of what had to take place had gone before them and their whispering was about breaking the reign of the ferret warlord so that they could let their relationship blossom.

As the latest bunch of reinforcements entered the window, Roseapple grasped the climbing rope and shinnied nimbly up to the window. Looking down below she saw what was holding her friend up.

A band of guards had caught Elmtree and they were leading him towards the Great Hall to await Oiltongues pleasure. She must try to save him.

Calling her band of fighters the squirrel passed out the arms that had been given to her. As she slung her bow and quiver over her shoulder she gave the final instuctions. “Now all of you hide in and outside the hall. I alone will try to face them and save Elmtree. If you hear my signal, come in and join me. Try to form a circle and hold our position. When the tide is against us, fight out to the escape route and head for the headquarters. We must live to fight another day!” As she finished speaking she slid a sword neatly into her belt. It was Elmtree’s first weapon and he prized it above all other weapons. Roseapple hoped that she could give it to him to fight another day. They’d make it though, they were planning a life after the war together.

When she entered the hall, Oiltongue was interrogating Elmtree. “Who are you with, What are you doing, Where did you go last night?” Firing shafts at the two guards holding her love, Roseapple rushed to his side. Standing back to back the two began to fend off all comers. As they horde drew closer, the brave squirrelmaid cried out. “Hemlocks Live On!” Immeadatly, reinforcements came. In the tide of battle, Elmtree was separated form Roseapple. When she spotted him over the heaving mass of hordebeasts and rebels, he was facing Oiltongue who had grabbed a spear form a dead hordebeast. Elmtail threw his sword. Oiltongue stepped aside and the weapon clattered harmlessly off the wallstones. Then, with his face alight with an evil grin, he released his weapon, aiming at Elmtree’s unprotected heart. His aim was true and Elmtail fell to the floor, his face awash with pain.

Roseapple fought like a berserker as she battled her way to where he lay. As he looked into her eyes he breathed one last sound, “love..” After that he breathed no more. Roseapple stood defiantly over his body, an arrow knocked on her bowstring. “The Hemlocks live Oiltongue. I have come to finish you.” Fear gave the warlord speed. In a lightning move, he slashed her bowstring leaving a line of blood crossing her right cheek, from chin to ear. As she fell to the ground beside him, he raised his sword for the killing blow. Fortunately for Roseapple, the remaining rebel forces retrieved her from the floor, dragging Elmtail’s poor body behind them. Roseapple was in a trance as they led her to Moledeep, and upon arriving, she passed out.

When she regained conciousness, there was the funeral of Elmtail to be attended to. She stood stoicly, through the whole ceremony, but as soon as it was done she ran into the woods. As she sat by the weeping willow she and Elmtail had dreamed about getting married under, she let the tears flow. Her love was gone, and she was left alone in the tyrants clutches. How could she continue on?

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Date Posted: 22:58:38 10/06/07 Sat

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Subject: Redwall Wars


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Snowflake
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Date Posted: 00:17:10 10/06/07 Sat

Prologue:

Welcome, my DAB friends to my story. A story of sadness, victory, happiness, and more. Vermin try to take over Redwall, Dibbuns are trying to prove they CAN fight, what will happen in this thrilling tale? Come closer and listen..............



Chapter 1:

A group of vermin sat around a hollow log, pushing and shoving to get the best spot. "What's the point? We're only going to get killed!" a ferret called Flametail asked madly. "Arial must be STUPID?!!Have you heard of Slagar? What about Damung Warfang? Tsarmina? Every one of them were killed, slaughtered!" Every vermin knew Flametail had strched the limit. Then, suddenly, Arial Bazoblade himself came up. "Have your doubts, Flametail?" Arial's dagger point was under Flametail's neck. "Er... no Chief. I was saying how smart you are." Flametail tried gulping, but the dagger point was too close. "You're lucky you are living scum. Next time anyone, and I mean anyone talks behind my baack agian, you'll curse the day you were borned."

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part eleven


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 23:37:52 10/05/07 Fri

Panic surged through her. Her paws were hitting the path one after another at a blurring speed. Reaching the main door she pounded on it as hard as she could. Glancing back, she could see the front rank of the horde would reach her soon.


Suddenly, Oakleaf cocked his ear as if listening to something. " What is it?" asked the three others. " I can hear something at the gate." Jumping up from his seat, he dashed toward the gatehouse. The others shrugged, then followed the squirrel.


Goldenblade speeded up until he was so close to the otter that he could see her gold stripe. A cry of triumph burst from his mouth.


As they reached the ramparts and the gatehouse, they could hear Skipper's otter crew. They had been patroling the ramparts when they had heard and seen what was happening. Skipper bounded up and started shouting. " Otter crew fire!" " What is it?" asked the Abbess. " A bunch of vermin chasin' a young otter!" shouted Skipper. They looked on in horror as the lead vermin leapt forward and shouted " nobeast escapes Goldenblade, otter!" . He layed a golden tipped scimitar on her neck. " Now you'll die nice an' slow." Skipper leaped up and loosed a stone from his sling.


Goldenblade grinned, he finally had her! Then the stone from Skipper's sling hit him on the paw. " Yowch!" He shouted, "retreat!". The vermin obeyed instantly.


She felt the scimitar on her neck. Then she heard the word retreat! She felt the pressure on her neck dissapear. Trying to stand up, she fainted with exhaustion.

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Date Posted: 22:14:44 10/04/07 Thu

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Subject: Snowflake's story: A tale of Redwall


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Snowflake (nervous)
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Date Posted: 00:03:48 10/02/07 Tue

Prologue:

Snowflake sat at the edge of the pond, kicking slightly, watching the ripples. A paw tapped her back. It was Anthony, her faithful friend. "What's wrong Anthony?" asked Snowflake, noting the concern in her friend's face. "Tangle is missing." he replied.

Deep in the wood of Mossflower, a dark figure ran through the trees. "I am not what you think. I simply do not want revenge. I want to conquer the nasty little club, DAB." its husky voice laughed. "This is only the begining. If you think THIS is terrifying, just wait." his laughter echoed all around......

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Subject: Check?


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Date Posted: 21:28:33 09/28/07 Fri

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter Four


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Geminya and Kaylar
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Date Posted: 16:43:04 09/29/07 Sat

“He’s getting smarter, I have to admit.” Roseapple and the other chieftains were holding a meeting in one of Brockhalls many unused dormitories. They couldn’t meet in the front room anymore because Oiltongues guards had made their camp outside, due to the increasing number of escaped slaves. The five score that had been liberated so far lived in the back dormitories with the chieftains sharing one room. Roseapple represented the Hemlock dray, Spearsteam’s Skipper was acting as the Skipper of the otters for all of Mossflower and Caterina was the acting commander of the Redwall forces. Captain Shortbow had taken two score to the southern caves to rally the hares in enslavement and recruit any otters or squirrels they could. She was due back in another season or so.

“It’s almost impossible to get in or out of here. If Oiltongue suspects…” Skipper voiced the thoughts of all of them. Brockhall had become a very dangerous place to be sitting in. The only thing that kept them from moving was the fact that there was nowhere else to go. All of the decent quarters had been captured by the tyrant. Only the still standing pieces of history remained.

“What about the old farmhouse by the river?” asked Caterina

“Covered with troops.” Skipper looked worried as he stroked his whiskers. “Is there any abandoned home somewhere in Mossflower?”

Elmtree entered the room bringing news and a possible solution. “Well, the guards where sniffing around the doors up top. Everyone else has retreated to the mole tunnels. We could go to Moledeep, but only to gather our forces to invade Redwall.”

“What!” Outraged cries echoed from all present. The squirrel continued on outlining his plan. “We go straight to where Oiltongue won’t think of us. We liberate the peaceful and replace them with fighting beasts so that when we’re ready, we surround Redwall and take it. Roseapple and I should go first. He hasn’t ever seen us and won’t recognize us if we’re spotted. Caterina, he knows you to well and Skipper, you need to take over the squirrels. We’ll get the mole to dig us into the cellars of the abbey. Caterina, you said that there was a passage leading to the cornerstone from the wine cellars? If so we can use that to keep in touch and move beasts in and out of the abbey.”

Murmured agreement followed this statement and the council broke up, gathering their scanty possessions, they proceeded to the escape tunnel and slipped out of Brockhall.

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Subject: War for Mossflower-Part 6


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SKy Songsword of the Newbies
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Date Posted: 18:41:12 09/28/07 Fri

Rosethorn grunted, holding tightly to the rope that was attached to the large sandstone block. She trudged on. A score of slaves were lugging it towards the unfinished tower. Suddenly, there was a shuddering gasp of exaustion nearby. The old shrew next to her had slumped over. The slave driver, Blackfang, stood on top of the sandstone block. He lashed his whip out. “C’mon, boatmouse! Put your back into it!” The shrew numbly flinched as the whip hit his back. Rosethorn felt the same bubbling anger in her stomach as the time she had first seen Serano. Blackfang drew the whip back, but when he struck out again at the old shrew, without thinking, she reach up and grabbed it, then realized that someone else had had the same idea. Rosethorn looked over the old shrew, into the startlingly green eyes of a squirrelmaid. The squirrelmaid smiled determinedly. “Together, friend?” She asked. Rosethorn nodded. “One, two, three!” They yanked the whip together, pulling Blackfang off the block of stone. He fell, landing heavily on his side. Rosethorn looked at the squirrel. “May I?” she asked. The squirrel grinned. “Be my guest.” Rosethorn lashed the whip out, growling at Blackfang, “Want a taste of your own medicine, vermin?”
“Stop! What is going on here?” The cold, commanding voice was loud. Serano swept up, surrounded by guards. He looked around, his lip curling as he took in the fallen Blackfang, Rosethorn, and the squirrelmaid. He scoffed. “Take them.” Four guards came forward and split, two of them grabbing Rosethorn, two to the squirrel. Serano looked at the two of them. “Tsk, tsk, Ariann, when are you going to learn to stay out of trouble?” He sneeringly chided the squirrel. Then the wildcat turned to Rosethorn. “And who are you?”
“My name is Rosethorn.” She gritted out between clenched teeth.
“Ah. Rosethorn.” Serano faced his guards. “Stake them out. We’ll let the weather have them.”
The last thing Rosethorn heard before the knife hilt hit her head was the squirrelmaid, --Ariann is her name, Rosethorn thought— telling Serano, “You’re even stupider than I thought.”

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Date Posted: 23:21:09 09/24/07 Mon

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Subject: Chapter 7, War


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:31:31 09/18/07 Tue

Mossyra was dreaming. Suddenly a large body crashed against her. She was alert instantly, all traces of sleepiness gone. Her thoughts turned immediately to Jakken, who was laying across her. Then to the crowd of vermin closing in. Then she thought of her dagger. "Jakken!" she hissed. "There's a dagger up my sleeve. Get it!" And their bonds were cut in ten seconds flat. They got up. And turned to face two hundred vermin coming towards them. From every direction. "Oh no." both dibbuns said.....

Swordling crossed her arms and sat on a hollow log. "You are making that up." "I am not! Martin did tell me where they are." said her companion Samkin. "This is not helping anyone, especially Mossyra and Jakken." "Oh, all right. I suppose it doesn't matter who told you where they are. Let's go." Swordling got up. They traveled together for awhile, Samkin leading, Swordling following. Until they heard voices....

There was no way they could win. Two hundred against two! There was no way! But Mossyra and Jakken wouldn't go out without a fight. They were about to be overrun when.... "Swordling! Samkin! We're here! Mossyra and Jakken are here! Come help us!!" Mossyra shouted. Swordling and Samkin fought there way to their friends in the middle of the ring of vermin. The battle had hardly begun when a sudden rumbling sound came. It was so loud the ground shook! And then....Dibbuns of all shapes and sizes stampeded into the battle. Every single dibbun came to help their friends. (exept Aqua, who spent the whole battle in the top of a tree) The vermin were slain within minutes. And Velika was slain. They all went back to Redwall and lived happily ever after.....Until the next adventure came along.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part ten


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 22:37:49 09/23/07 Sun

Friar Clementine was a small but ferocious mouse. Wielding her wooden ladle she gracefully served breakfast to any who asked. The next three creatures she served were the Abbess, Skipper, and Oakleaf the recorder. Handing them their usual breakfast she asked " anything else ?". The reply she recieived from all thre of them was the same. " No, thank you Friar." Grabbing their meals gratefully they headed for Cavern Hole. Finding a seat at a table in Cavern Hole, they tore into their food gratefully. " As I said before, what does it all mean ?". The Abbess was the first one of them to speak. " I dunno, ask Oakleaf he's the one with all the brains." Said Skipper. " I don't know but I'll find out. " Was Oakleaf's dry reply.


She kept down as long as she could. By the time she got to the surface her lungs were bursting. Popping up she saw nothing. She heard the yells of the pursuing vermin. Diving back under yet again she shot through the water faster than before. Popping up again she saw the Abbey of Redwall. Looming out of the trees like a good omen. She swam for the bank. Jumping onto dry land she charged toward the Abbey. Chancing a glance backward she saw what she didn't want to see. They were right behind her !


Goldenblade hollered, urging his vermin on. " There's the otter ! Catch her !" The vermin speeded up their pace, heading toward the lone otter infront of them. Bit by bit they gained on her.

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Date Posted: 18:25:22 09/23/07 Sun

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Subject: A stolen Tapestry: Figment two.


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Date Posted: 16:33:59 09/23/07 Sun

Samkin's eyes searched the forest. He had heard it. He knew it. The vermin were close by. Of course, he was perched in an elm. He had traveled swiftly to intercept the vermin. Then he heard it again. A twig snapped. Then another. He could hear leaves being brushed aside, branches cracked, and whippy saplings branches swishing quikly into place. The sound of leaves being crumpled underpaw increased. The vermin surely was were making nopise. He was just getting ready to jump into a nearby dagwood when he saw them. A vast horde, huge! Redwall was lucky they didn't have to fight this army. Then he saw the tapestry! Beautiful as ever, it was strung to a pike sticking high in the air, serving as a hugely impressive standard. He waseasing his unstrung bow out of his quiver, the vermin directly beneath him, when a slingstone came whizzing up and knocking, unconscious, quiver and all, frm his position in the forest guardian.




At Redwall, the sparras had discovered something on the Abbey roof. It was words, but luckily, there were a few sparras who had taken it into them to learn how to read. Or course, they couldn't write, what with the lack of paws and presence of talons. The engravement read as thus: 'If ever there is a time in Redwall when a great trouble occurs, and there is no way to get help from Salamandastron otherwise, place Martin the Warrior's shield on the slot below. Nothing will happen till a lightning storm.' And, of course, there was a place below this for the shield to go. Now, the Abbot ralised that this was a very quick way to get Salamandastron's help with the Tapestry business, so, while still not knowing what would happen, he had the shield installed.
Luckily, a lightning storm struck the very dayafter the shield had been placed. The shield was at a /VERY/ strange angle, and many doubted anything would happen at all. But, as a brilliant bolt of lightning struck the shield, and a loud blast of thunder rolled into the very foundations of Redwall Abbey, through every crack, nook and cranny, something extremely odd happened.
The shield, set as it was at an odd angle, actually deflected the lightning, and it soared through the sky, visible as a brilliant bright streak, for a good few leagues.
Lord Brockstripe saw this, and, knowing from the histories of his ancient mountain that this meant Redwall was in deep trouble, set out immediately, leaving half the Long Patrol, five hundred hares, to be exact, to guard the mountain, he took the other half and set out at once.

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Subject: Chapter 6, What Do We Do?


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 23:52:07 09/16/07 Sun

Swordling slowed down about a mile from the camp. Even through the haze of pain and grief that was her mind, she could see that Mossyra could be anywhere. She might never see her Mossy again. And she might...No. She pushed the thought out of her head. Mossyra was alive, she was sure of it. And Jakken too, she reminded herself. She missed him too. Something rustled up in the trees. She was ready for an attack before you could blink an eye. She looked up again. A net? The only thing she couldn't guard against! It was over her in seconds. A small squirrel with a face she recognized hopped down to the snarling mousemaid.

Samkin had been tracking Swordling. It wasn't really hard. The crazed mousemaid had left a trail as clear as day. She finally slowed down. Finally. He took his chance. After the grief-stricken mousemaid had been captured, he said: "I'm sorry, Swordling, but this was the only way to get you to listen to me." Swordling sighed. "Okay. I'm listening. Just get this net off me." Samkin hurried to take it off. "I think I might know where Mossyra and Jakken are."


Jakken woke to a steady pounding of pain in his head. He opened his eyes to find that he was tied up, lying on the ground. He looked up...To find a evilly grinning face staring at him. A ferret. He hated ferrets. "Hello, rabbit." The ferret's voice was high and cold. "Tell me where your abbey is, or I will order them to hurt your friend." "Never!" said Jakken. "They all say that, but they always do!" she chuckled evilly. "Get the squirrel." An assortment of vermin advanced toward Mossyra. Jakken threw himself on Mossyra. The vermin were getting closer....

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part nine


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 23:58:08 09/22/07 Sat

A blow from the flat of Goldenblade's sword knocked him flat into the water. Swiftly his companions hauled him out. " Listen you waterclogged dirtbrains, where do otters go?" Striding through his assembled vermin, he singled out one particulary nasty looking specimin of a fox. Bristling with weaponry he stared back at his leader blankly. " I repeat, where do otters go?" Was the question. " In the w,w ..water sire." Was the hesitant answer. " Smart fox! What's your name?" " Badtail sire." " Fine!" Turning to face his vermin he said, " Otters go in the water. This is a great river. She must be far off now. We must follow her ! The river Moss opens somewhere near the Abbey of Redwall. That's where she'll go. And that, is where we'll go too." Striding to the front of the crowd he began to march. Everybeast followed him.


Once she slipped in she cut through the water like an arrow. Many plants and interesting pebbles tried gain her attention, but failed. Not until she was sure that she was far enough away did she pop up to look around. Nothing but trees. She ducked back underwater.


Silence reigned for a minute. It was broken by the Abbess speaking. " What does it all mean?" " Nothing that I know about" Said Skipper. The general murmur broke out. Oakleaf tweaked the Abbess's whiskers. " I know what it means! You haven't had breakfast! Come on Skipper let's go get some." The three bustled off toward where Friar Clementine was serving breakfast.

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter Three


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Date Posted: 23:07:08 09/20/07 Thu

“Where is that slave!” Oiltongue bellowed furiously as he looked about the captains staying at Redwall with him. His most suspected slave had gone missing and he wanted to know why. “I told you all to keep an eye on her and where did that get me! A valuable source of information lost. You blundering buffoons! Can you scruffy pawed addle-brained fools keep track of just one hare! I should throw you to the pike just let loose in the pond. Fortunatly for you, I need all paws on deck to find that slave!” Oiltongue’s captains shuddered as the warlord poured out his wrath upon them. Hurrying away the called their patrols and set out to find that slave. Knowing that the next time this happened, Oiltongue would not be so merciful, the captain of the guard stationed all his troops around the slave pens. What they didn’t know was that the slaves at Redwall were not of any use to the rebels. They first were going to rescue the former leaders of the areas they came from. After all, what was a snake without its head?

Long Patrol General Tymain Shortbow sat at the kitchen table with the other escaped slaves. The harsh life had taken their toll on the fighting hare. Her cheeks were sunken and the hollows under here eyes betrayed that she was accustomed to hard labor. One only needed to look in her eyes to see the fire burning to keep fighting. “So” she asked, her voice hollow with hunger. “What is your plan?”

Roseapple slid a bowl of light vegetable broth towards the hare. “The plan will not work without you. We are to gather the chieftains form their enslavements and then free the warlike. After we are all fit, we march upon Redwall!”
“Count me in.”

As the seasons progressed, the warlord and his minions grew increasingly frustrated with the rebels. Former chieftains were being liberated and nobody could discover by whom and where they were hiding. Among the slaves there was new hope. Many squirrels began talking about the prophecy in which a squirrel of the Hemlocks line would free them. This soon passed to all of the compounds and species and it was rumored that a squirrel was helping the chieftains escape. The slaves would talk at night around the light of a single candle, talking of hope that the rebels would come to liberate them. Roseapple and the others had many loyal followers thrust into the dungons and cellars of the various strongholds thoughout the countryside. Amazingly, those were rescued, and their chains found in a pile with a leaf on top of it. A hemlock leaf to be precise.

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Date Posted: 00:03:06 09/20/07 Thu

Checkpoint! Sunset, why'd you bump your post?

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part eight


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 23:58:55 09/18/07 Tue

"I," he said, recovering himself completely. " I had a dream, but it wasn't any ordernary dream marm" " What sort of dream was it?" Was the calm reply. " Martin the Warrior spoke to me. He spoke words to me, strange ones." " Really? Listen, go get Oakleaf the recorder and tell him to bring some parchment." " Right away. " The otter rushed off, and was back in a minute with a old squirrel with a particularliy bushy tail. " Here he is." Said Skipper. The squirrel marched straight up to the Abbess. " What do you want me for? A body could get awful cold on a morning like this." He muttered. " Listen Oakleaf, did you bring some parchment?" He whisked some out from behind his back. "Aye, I did. Something to write with to." "Good then listen to Skipper, he has something to say." She nodded to the otter, who cleared his throat and began to speak. "This morning Martin spoke to me. He said some words. This is wot he said,
Now tis' Spring,
soon tw'ill be Summer.
Watch for the running slave,
the young ottermaid.
The warrior will reveal itself,
in the time of need.
Silence fell on all who heard the otter chieftain's words.


By midday she reached the river Moss. Full with water and flowing neatly, it was a beatiful sight. She was staring at it in awe when she heard shouts and chanting. Wait! She had heard that sound before! The words were getting louder and clearer. " Goldenblade, Goldenblade! Death to his enemies!!" So they had found she was missing! She would have to take to the water and swim. She hesitated, but the sound growing closer made up her mind. She took a deep breath and slid into the water.


Goldenblade was furiuos. He had defeated Badclaw's forces but, one of those lavy slaves had escaped! It was the otter, the one with the goldstripe. He vowed what he would do to her when he got her under his paws. He urged his vermin on with shouts and blows. " Come on you lot, catch that otter!" They stopped on the bank of the river Moss. " Where is she?" Piped up one stoat.

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Date Posted: 22:29:24 09/18/07 Tue

Checkpoint!

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #6: Terry


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Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 17:53:21 09/18/07 Tue

"Alright, then! Terrible, over here, you'll be fighting Eidal." I had thought things couldn't possibly get any worse, but it seems I had been wrong. Eidal was well known for his fighting skills, and here I was, drawn against him as soon as we had started. I gritted my teeth, holding my head up high. Phil always said that looking confident was sometimes enough to put your opponent off. I doubted it would have much effect on Eidal, but every little helps. I knew it was unwise to let him have the first move, so I lunged as quickly as possible, and it worked! I caught him off guard, and before I knew it, he had stumbled backwards, and was lying in the dirt.

"Excellent, Terrible!" bellowed the sergeant. That made it worse. I now had a reputation to defend.

Phil

I watched Terry on the battlefield, and I have to say I was mightily impressed! He did everything I had ever taught him, and it had paid off. I felt so proud of him, but I realised there was a downside to hid success too. Now everyone would expect him to win, and if he didn't, I knew he would feel awful. Eidal was an experienced fighter, and this would have simply made him more determined. I didn't hold out much hope for Terry'd chances of winning.

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter Two


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Geminya and Kaylar of AA
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Date Posted: 00:29:50 09/18/07 Tue

As Oiltongue moved south, more communities fell under his paw, including the famed Abbey of Redwall. All who resisted him were slain and he ruled all of Mossflower Woods and Salamandastron.
Redwall had fallen as the otters and the champions had been called by the GOUSIM shrews for aid and where away when their home was captured. Salamandastron had fallen as there was no badger to rule at the present, only a group of hares. The creatures under his paw moaned as more slaves where added to his collection. Those who he wanted to keep an eye on where placed in the abbey, where he ruled from, leaving his general in charge of Salamandastron and other high ranking officers in charge of the other outposts.

Slackpaw was in charge of the former Hemlock Dray. Though the blood had long been washed away, the squirrels serving there could tell where the blood of their queen and her family had been spilled. Roseapple, a descendent of the queen worked dutifully under the eye of Slackpaw. Under her cover of maid, her anger smoldered and burned as it showed in her eyes. The other slaves were mostly too timid to think about rebelling, but Roseapple and a few friends met in the shadows each night and planned the day of their liberation. Roseapple was in one of the perfect spots for spying, Slackpaw’s maid. She could listen in on his conversations and relay information to the other two. Then Spearstream, an otter from Camp Willow, placed there because he was a low threat would try and mess up the armory, where he worked to make it harder than the normal difficulty to earn a new territory. Elmtree, a squirrel who grew up with her in the former dray of the Hemlocks was positioned in communications and could mess a few up if need be. The three were meeting in a shadowy corner of the slave dorm one night after the vermin had been particularly brutal.

“If there’s a way to escape, it’s here.” Roseapple pointed a paw towards a weakned branch in the floor of the room. “If we can tear these apart subtly, and patch these up so they’re unnoticeable, we can escape!” Elmtree raised a paw in caution. “Not so loud, you’ll alert the guards, or worse, wake the spies among us.” The last words were spoken in a ringing whisper and the escapees fell silent, working quietly and carefully at the escape hole.

Three nights later the hole was ready. Roseapple, Spearstream and Elmtree slipped quietly out of the hole wearing black traveling cloaks that Spearstream had pilfered from the armory and each had some sort of weapon. Spearstream had a sling and pebbles, Elmtree had a bow and arrows plus a dagger and Roseapple had the same equipment as her friend. As they traveled through Mossflower woods, the stopped by a massive oak to camp for a while and check their strategy. Sitting down in the hollow created by the roots, the trio was surprised to hear a voice call out, “Who’s there, are you friend or foe?” The voice was thin, but stronger than anyone they knew. “We’re two squirrel’s here, traveling with an otter to escape the paw of Oiltongue the Warlord. What about you, are you with him or against him?” Roseapple countered.
“I’m Caterina Swordsight, formerly of Redwall Abbey. I was the Abbey Warrior, at least until we fell under the paw of that scum. He locked me in the ruins of Brockhall to die alone. Have you come to give me aid?”

Roseapple stood up and looked at where she had previously been sitting and noticed something new, a small door set into the earth at the trees roots. Stepping up to it she worked at prizing the lock open. When she finally got it open, a thin mouse stepped forward. “Come in friends. It’s almost dawn and patrols will be sent out. I see you have a haversack of food apiece. We can breakfast and talk as the day carries on.”

Caterina showed them to the old kitchens, deep under the roots of Brockhall. Walking past the abandoned rooms, Roseapple was aware of the fact that this would be an ideal headquarters for the rebels. Sitting at the table eating a scanty breakfast of bead and cheese the foursome discussed their plans.
“We can use this place as headquarters, gather the rebels from all of the outposts and march upon Oiltongue and his horde.”
“How, we’d need to make sure that nobody could come to his aid and then storm Redwall.”
“We chase them out of Camp Willow, the Helmlock dray, and anywhere else in Mossflower. Then we lay siege so they can’t send messengers to Salamandastron. When we have Redwall we march on Salamandastron.”
“It won’t work, we don’t have enough forces…”
“Not know but later…”
“Stoppit! I have a plan. Can I talk without you bickering about something?” All of the fugitives turned to look at Roseapple, who began outlining her plan. “Now… Here’s what we must do….” All heads nodded in agreement with the young squirrelmaid’s audacious plan.

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Subject: Check


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Date Posted: 00:25:13 09/18/07 Tue

Checkpoint!

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part seven


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 00:11:24 09/18/07 Tue

He said,
Now tis'Spring,
soon twill'be Summer.
Watch for the running slave,
the young ottermaid.
The warrior will reveal itself,
in the time of need.

"Skipper, I'm surprised with you, sleepwalking and staring at Martin like you were under a trance!" "Whaa? Oh, g'mornin' Mother Abbess." He said, rubbing sleep from his eyes. "Good morning to you too. I'll just head down to breakfast." She marched off. "Martin!" His dream suddenly came back to him. "Abbess! wait!" He rushed through many groups of creatures to where he could see the Abbess's bushy tail. He reached her and started breathlessly to pant out an explanation. "Skipper, what is it? Calm down!" He settled down and caught his breath. I ... his voice trailed off.

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #5: Phil


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Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 18:18:50 09/17/07 Mon

I stood outside the school hut in the freezing cold; I couldn't be bothered to go back inside the mountain, as I'd be starting in the near future anyway. I shivered and pressed my ear to the door, trying to hear what was going on inside. I heard Terry's name, and panicked slightly, but it was only the register.

I was so absorbed in the class' discussion that I didn't notice the sergeant's pawsteps approaching the door, and he flung it open into my nose. I stifled a gasp of pain, and stepped backwards into a shadowy crack in the wall, hoping I wouldn't be noticed - I doubted that he liked eavesdroppers, somehow.

Terry

We headed out of the classroom to practice our combat skills on the sparring ground, after a quick tutorial from the sergeant. He looked quite comical, but I had prepared myself for the worst. I enjoyed fighting, but I was no good at it. It was with shaking paws that I picked up my sabre.

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Subject: Check


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Date Posted: 00:08:53 09/17/07 Mon

Checkpoint!

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Chapter One


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Geminya & Kaylar of AA
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Date Posted: 23:50:38 09/16/07 Sun

Chapter One

The Warlord stalked triumphantly down the rows of prisoners. A ferret he was, full of natural cunning. The dray of Squirrelqueen Peach Hemlock was captured and woe was heavy among the captives. Standing at the head of the rows, he began to announce his titles: “I’m Oiltongue, your new master. You’ll address me as High King Oiltongue. Now who will you serve, this doddering squirrel or me?” The last bit was said in a dangerously sweet voice as the guards made everybeast kneel. Three squirrels were led in, an old grandmother, a young strong male with wounds so horrific it was a surprise he could walk. The last was a young squirrelmaid who moved with the grace of one accustomed to ruling over a multitude. “So Peach, we meet again. If I remember correctly the last time I saw you, you were a little one who escaped me. I swore I would track you down and destroy you and your family. I’ve come to fulfill that vow. We met last time on the Northern Plains where you had your families tribal home. Now you’ve moved south. What a pleasant choice. So many more places to plunder, and so much more to take from.” Oiltongue spoke in an almost pleasant manner, as if he was greeting an acquaintance at a social gathering.

“Now, back to business. Since you’ve defied me for the last time, I think its fitting you watch the others die, knowing that their deaths are upon your head. Slackpaw, start with the old one.” The grandmother, who had been standing silently all this time began to cry out, “Murder, Foul One, A…uhh.” She was cut short by Slackpaws blade as he stopped her cries forever, her blood dripping off his sword point. The weasel lord continued his execution “And now for this one. Your mate isn’t he? What a shame he met you. If he hadn’t, he might not die today. As he did become your mate, today becomes his dying day. I’m not going to leave any loose ends to try and kill me later.” Nodding at Slackpaw, Oiltongue watched in fascination as the male tried to put up a fight and was slain. Turning to Peach he said, using a voice telling her that he was bored with all the drama “Now little Peach, it’s your turn to join him. You’ll see your mate at the gates of the Dark Forest.” Slackpaws blade glittered once in the dusk of that evenings sunset. The clouds were tinted red, reflecting the blood that ran freely in the entrance hall of the Hemlock dray.

Squirrels cried unashamedly that night, for the only hope they had was lost, they did not know of any other way that they could be saved. As they were hurled into their new barracks a middle aged squirrel told them not to despair hope would rise anew, it had been prophesized. The guards slew him instantly and locked the slaves up. Little did anyone know, one member of the Hemlock squirrels remained; a young babe by the name of Applerose. The only daughter of Peach Hemlock was sentenced to a life behind the lash, but she was not the redeemer of the squirrels. No, another from her line would be born to rise and free the slaves from their shackles. But whom, and when? Only time would tell.

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Subject: The Squirrel Heir: Prolouge


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Geminya & Kaylar of AA
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Date Posted: 23:48:27 09/16/07 Sun

Legend will tell of a time far from now…

A wizened old soothsayer spoke into the flames of her lonely fire, unaware of the eyes watching form the shadows.

Older than her age
Young as she is
She will rise and fall:
The squirrel queen near Redwall

The shadowy figures disappeared. This wasn’t what they were sent to hear. It wasn’t what they were looking for. The soothsayer carried on in a low whisper:

One of her line will rise
To break the tyrants chain
Only fire in her eyes
To burn through her pain

The squirrel queen will rise again
To set the others free
Ordinary at first glance
But far less ordinary than me.

With the last words, the soothsayer dropped dead where she sat, leaving the flames of her fire to die slower than she. The prophecy had been made, only time could help it blossom.

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Subject: Chapter 5, A Bad Situation


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:43:29 09/16/07 Sun

Jakken woke up to a spear prodding between his eyes. He saw he was tied to a tree. This was all he needed to know.
Except.... "Mossyra!" Suddenly the spear flipped and the
spearbutt (non-pointy end) hit him between the eyes and he
went down. The last thing he heard before darkness claimed him was a high cruel laugh.

Mossyra saw him go down and tried to struggle, but the ropes were just too tight. "Oh, great. Vermin who know what they're doing." Until she remembered... The dagger she had slipped into her sleeve. But before she could reach for it...
"That squirrel's awake, your majesty." said a rough voice. A high, cold voice answered him and said, "Use the herbs." A strong smelling plant was shoved under her nose. She knew no more.

Swordling was frantic. It took nearly a score of dibbuns to hold her back. Tiltzie said, "Swordling, I am absolutely sure that this can be talked over rationally-" But Swordling screamed, "HOW CAN YOU SIT BACK AND TALK WHILE MY MOSSY IS MISSING!" At that point she ran into the forest, knocking dibbuns out of her way left and right in her haste to find Mossyra. Tarpin looked at Zotch. "Oh no."

Samkin was beyond hysteria. Mossyra, his Mossrya...gone. But he was prepared to "talk it over rationally". So they had a meeting in the midst of the ruined camp. "Has anyone got any idea of Mossyra or Jakken might be?" asked Tangle. "Well, don't get me bally wrong here, but I might have seen some hooded figures bending over them, wot wot? But I was being pushed over by that bally rascal Zotch, so I'm not sure." offered Tarpin. "How many times do I have to tell you, you windbag of a rabbit, that I was saving your skin!" Zotch stood up. "Here's what really happened...." Samkin knew this was going nowhere. So he sneaked off after Swordling.

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Subject: Chapter 4, The Capture


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:38:36 09/16/07 Sun

....Or was it? For Velika was on the move. She had been in Mossflower for 2 days.

Jakken wandered around the outside of the camp. He had lost the bragging contest again. And the insult contest. And...he didn't even want to think about the race.

Mossyra was having the time of her life. She won every contest she entered. Now she was dancing around the campfire. Out of the corner of her eye she saw Jakken moping around the edge of camp. She went over to him.
"What is it, Jakk-" she fell over, senseless, a small dart in her paw.
"Mossyr-" he went down, this dart in his leg.
Zotchum, who had seen it all from a distance, yelled for everyone to stay down. Several darts whizzed over the heads of the dibbuns. In the confusion, nobeast noticed 3 dark figures take Mossyra and Jakken

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Subject: Chapter 3, The Dibbun Festival


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:36:05 09/16/07 Sun

Chapter 3 The Dibbun Festival

Lekelia the sparra maid flew back and forth over the clearing, clutching her spear. Tangle had told her to keep watch.
"It's not my fault I can't pitch tents." she muttered to herself. "Sparras were made for flying, not messing around with a bunch of poles."
"Time to go!" Tangle said.
So they did.

Early the next morning all the dibbuns got up and went down to Dibbun Hall. They were all so quiet you could have heard a pin drop.
"Let's go." Swordling whispered. They all heard her. She tip-pawed over to the door. "All clear!"
They all rose and walked toward the wall-gate.
A dark figure stood in front of the door.
"Skipper!" they gasped.
"And where do you think you're going?" Skipper asked in his deep voice.
"We are going to our Dibbun Festival!" Swordling said. "And you aren't going to stop us!" sounding braver than she felt.
"Who said I was going to stop you?" Skipper said, utterly astonished. "Here, let me open the gate for you." So he did, and so they left.

They got there and immediately started dancing. Lissi took up her place as musician. They all started to sing....
"Mix honey with honey and honey in honey
Get a big pot and pour it on thick..."
It was going to be a good Dibbun Festval.

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Subject: Chapter 2, Queen Velika


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:32:54 09/16/07 Sun

Chapter 2 Queen Velika

Meanwhile, a ship was sailing towards them. The ferret Queen Velika sat on her throne overlooking the lower deck. Velika was Queen of the ancient vermin fortress Velban. She was the most dangerous beast in all the northlands. Midnight black from tailtip to nose with gleaming, shimmering eyes the exact color of Tagdust.
"Your highness," said one of her crewbeasts, bowing low. "we have spotted Mossflower Wood."
"Good" said Velika, suddenly crafty and snakelike. "when exactly did you see it."
He scratched his chin and said:
"I dunno, mebbe a half hour ago?"
"A HALF HOUR AGO! WHY WAS NO ONE SENT TO TELL ME!!" Velika raged. She raised her dagger and plunged in into the helpless beast's chest. He was tagged instantly.
"Redwall will soon be mine!" she cackled. Her insane laughter tore through the air.
Velika was coming!

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Subject: Chapter 1, Tangle's Surprise


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lissi of AA
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Date Posted: 22:30:38 09/16/07 Sun

Chapter 1 Tangle's Surprise

Rays of sun pierced through the trees as the glorious summer of Mossflower came to a close. Tangle didn't notice as she charged through the forest, looking for the for the clearing the squirrel Samkin had told her about. It took her nearly all day to find it. When she finally did, it was sunset. She sat down and surveyed the clearing. It had one huge tree in the center. Tangle reached into the backpack she was carrying and pulled out a large sign. It read:

1st Annual
DIBBUN FESIVAL

"Tomorrow I'll take some dibbuns and pitch tents." she decided.
She took one more look around, then strode off into the night.
***
The ottermaid Lissi looked up from her dinner just in time to see Tangle enter Dibbun Hall.
"I have a very important announcment to make! In two days, we will have our first annual Dibbun Fesival!" Tangle said.
"I need Tarpin, Samkin, Leiky and Tiltzie to come with me tomorrow to help pitch tents.
"What happens at the Fesival?" Mossyra asked.
"Fun" said Tangle.
All the dibbuns cheered!

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale: Part six


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 23:45:12 09/15/07 Sat

Getting out was not very hard since all the vermin were fighting each other. Staying behind the slave pens she slipped out and started running. She did not stop until the hubbub was far behind her. She began racking her brain for a solution. Wait! Hadn't she heard her parents once say that a great sandstone house named Redwall was somewhere off the river Moss? She had! She could find the river Moss. Her parents had told her that she was attracted to running water. So she set out, letting her instincts take over. It soon was dark. She sheltered herself underneath some ferns and soon fell into a light sleep. The tittering of birds soon woke her. She dug around until she found some roots to eat. She was then on the march, going as swiftly and silently as she could. By midday she thought she heard water. It was faint, but definetly water! She set out in the direction that she had heard it.

Meanwhile, at Redwall nobeast was aware of the oncoming danger. Nobeast but the cooks were awake this early. Not really, Skipper of otters had been sleepwalking. He was standing in front of the tapestry of Martin the Warrior, staring. Suddenly, Martin began to speak. What he said astounded the burly otter.

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Subject: A little poem I wrote.


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Samkin
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Date Posted: 16:15:33 09/15/07 Sat

Friendship is like a delicate bird,
The ease in ruining it is truly absurd.
Trust is a blossoming flower, with petals fragile.
Years to build it,
Seconds and it is a rubbish pile.
Loyalty, a star, a light in the dark,
Beautiful as the song of a lark,
But as the rest, while being glorious,
‘Twill not, if abused, be victorious.
If any of these you find in your control,
Be extra careful, or pay the toll.
A tiny mistake, a miniature fault,
Miniscule problems start the assault,
However thick are your walls of trust,
They will always fall and lay ruined in the dust.
So be mindful if handling any of these,
Or they will crumble, and blow away in the breeze.

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #4: Phil


Author:
Cuoha, Bramble & Fergus (GG)
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Date Posted: 11:40:08 09/15/07 Sat

I was rather surprised that Terry came without a fuss, as it was the crack of dawn, but it made it a lot easier. We sat in the mess hall: I was eating porridge lustily, but Terry had hardly touched his - he was merely stirring it around his bowl. I didn't press him; I knew how he felt, and that eating would be the least of his worries once he got to school. If anything, his lack of appetite actually made it easier, as we didn't have to wait, and thus we were outside the schoolhut 10 minutes early. I wiped the sweat off my brow - as much as I pretended school would be fun for Terry, my nerve was failing me.

Terry

I stood nervously outside the hut - the wait was awful. I think I'd have rather been late. I shifted from paw to paw, unable to keep still. When the sergeant finally arrived, I was so absorbed in my own, worried thoughts that I didn't notice him.

"Terrible by name, terrible by nature! Stand up straight, laddie-buck!"

His voice shocked me out of my reverie. I could have cried easily, but I stifled my tears. Why was he picking on me? There was a whole queue of first-years behind us, each escorted by their parents. And me, escorted by my brother. Why did our parents have to be so useless? I sighed, and stood up straight, determined not to give the sergeant any reason to despise me.

"Yes, sah!"

He opened the door, and I walked quietly in, unsure of what to do now that Phil had gone. We had to leave our parents/brothers outside, for the first-years were starting an hour earlier than everyone else. I chose a desk near the back of the classroom, and sat down, trembling.

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Subject: The stolen Tapestry: Sigment one.


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Samkin
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Date Posted: 02:32:01 09/15/07 Sat

All the Abbey residents were asleep on that fateful night. 'Twas a new moon, so the otter crews in Mossflower had no moonlight to see as the vermin came. They had been here before, oh yes, and had read the gatehouse records, for these vermin were a particularly intelligent breed, and not only could they and talkproperly, but they knew that to wage war on Redwall would end in victory for the Redwallers, no matter what. However, the old red sandstone did have some treasures, the Tapestry, for instance. North, as far north as you could go, was where they lived. 'Twas so far north that the climate was rather warm, warmer than this Mossflower country. No, there land was not Mossflower, but Northwarm it was called. They sent one over the wall with a grappling hook, he unlocked the north wickergate. Only one was needed to go in, called Darkfur, as nobeast, not even himsself, knew his real name. His fur was black, cloak was black, everything about him was dark, black, and merciless. In reality he was a small rat, though nobeast but him knew it, he having murdered his parents. Darkfur easily cu through the fastening with his extremely sharp dagger, with black hilt, pommel stone, and blade, of course. It was so sharp it could slice throughh armor as if it were butter. He rolled the great cloth up, and carried it back to the main body of vermin, who then stole back north. They were well away from Redwall by the time daylight pervaded the night, chasing away bad dreams but not the awful realization, thehorrible shock, the terrifying discovery, that the Tapestry was gone. Without a trace, they said, for no clueshad been found. Except one. Found by a Dibbun squirrel by the name of Samkin, all it was was a black patch of fabric, once part of a completely black cloak, but it was made of a cotton the was nicknamed Blackcloth, for 'twas entirely black, and the darkest cloths, black as a moonless midnight, were made from it, and it came from lands that were constantly at war, inhabited by vermin with their black hearts. The far North. The area just about 50 miles south from the land not known as the North, or the South, nor was it part of Mossflower. But rather, it was named Northwarm.

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Subject: War for Mossflower-Part 5


Author:
Sky Songsword of the Newbies
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Date Posted: 22:40:52 09/14/07 Fri

Serano quickly recovered his composure and began to sneer. “Ah. Ariann. Back again?”
Ariann stood her ground as the wildcat began to prowl around her. “Yes, I’m sooo glad to be back.” Every one of her muscles was tensed for action. “I see you’ve trained your idiots, Serano.”
“My idiots? That’s offensive. Only I’m allowed to call them idiots.” There was a small noise of protest from Fleafur. Serano whipped around, pull a dagger from its sheath and hurled it. Fleafur’s eyes glazed over as he grasped the dagger handle that seemingly grew of his stomach. He slumped back against the wall as Serano continued as if nothing had happened. “And yes, I have trained them. They took your weapons this time.” Ariann’s piercing green eyes grew even colder. Serano even kills his own servants, she thought. What a nice reward for faithful servitude. Although it helps me. On less guard to kill.
Serano ran a paw to the scar on her shoulder. “It’s such a pity that I had to give you this, Ariann.”
Ariann fingered the tiny dagger on concealed on the inside of her belt, her movements concealed by her overly large tunic. She could kill Serano now and be done with it. “A pity? Why?” Her calm voice betrayed nothing.
“Why, a pity to marr such beauty, of course.” Ariann whipped out her dagger and held it to his throat. “Tell me why I shouldn’t do it.” She whispered. “Tell me why I shouldn’t avenge all the fathers, mothers, young ones you’ve murdered.” The blade pressed closer, drawing a line of blood. Serano’s came up and grabbed the back of her neck, then pushed backwards. The squirrelmaid stumbled, and Serano grabbed the dagger out of her hand. Pushing her back against the wall, he knocked her on the head with the daggers hilt. As she slumped to the floor, he answered her. “Because I have more to kill, more to conquer. And eventually, Ariann, I will kill you too.” The wildcat swept out of the cell, slamming the door behind him. Ariann rose from where she had been feigning unconsciousness. “Are you willing to bet on that, Serano?” She murmured to the air.

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #3: Terry


Author:
Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 18:47:47 09/14/07 Fri

I felt my duvet shake, and at first I thought it was just the wind through the open window, but it persisted, and I was forced to poke my head out to discover the source of my disturbance. My ears crumpled as I realised there would be no way to simply pretend I did not exist. It was Phil. As much as I loved him, and he cared for my where our parents so miserably failed, in that moment I really wished he didn't exist. If I had realised what would happen later, I would never have wished such a thing, but I was, at that time, blissfully ignorant of such matters.

"Terry!" he whispered gently, so as not to wake me too abruptly. He waited until he could be sure I was awake, and then picked out a clean tunic from the wardrobe for me. One of my smarter ones - I hardly ever wore it, for it had a stiff, decidedly annoying collar, but I was in no position to argue. I knew he was only trying to help, and that was the only reason I got up without complaint, and donned the tunic, scratching my neck, but trying not to look too irritated. He held the door open for me, and we headed down to breakfast.

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Subject: The Abbey Attics: Part Two


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Geminya and Kaylar of AA
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Date Posted: 21:55:25 09/13/07 Thu

Geminya was distrought.

She had no best friend and all the other dibbns were wary of her. It was hard to live as the abbey outcast. She spent most of her days locked in the gatehouse, and most of her nights lying awake in the orchards during the summer to watch the stars or in the storerooms off the kitchens in the winters. She was terribly lonely for Kaylar.

One day Geminya was sitting out in the orchard having a few apples and some cold mint tea when a few dibbuns walked by, they weren't dibbuns anymore she realized, they were young adults now. They stopped at the next tree over and wispered for Geminya's ears to pick up "That's the traitor who betrayed us by forming a counter group. I'm surprised she hadn't left by now. She has no friends and can only hide away for a little time before she has to go out of the spot. Nobody trusts her anymore. At least not us."

Geminya sat transfixed leaning aginst the tree. It was true, she knew it was but why did they say it?

The mousemaid threw away her fruit and tea and picking up her habit she fled to the gatehouse where she locked the door and cried as if her heart had desinigrated(sp?). she did not come out for a while after that.

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Subject: War of Mossflower: Part 1


Author:
snowflake
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Date Posted: 00:50:48 09/13/07 Thu

In Mossflower, the silence was about to be broken by a warlord.

Zakkin Zalverin was a slim ferret who carried a blade that was not ordinary. It was his name that struck fear into everyone, yet, being young, no one joined his horde. But he worked hard and succeded in getting 50 score of vermin. Redwall would be a prime catch for a young warlord.

Redwall stood strong, not knowing the dangers about to happen.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale:Part Five


Author:
Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 23:51:56 09/11/07 Tue

As quickly as she could she climbed up the walls to the window. When she got there she did not have much trouble getting out. The rock had smashed all the bars completely through. The next step was getting out of the vermin camp. She waited, standing in the shadows. When she saw her chance she grabbed it, darting behind the slave pens. While she was hurrying along, she heard part of a conversation between two of Goldenblade's guards that had dropped out of the fight. "I thought ol' Goldenblade said that'n we was going to capture Redwall.""Nah" said the other, "he'd rather be fightin' Badclaw's bunch." Redwall! Redwall! She repeated it over and over again. It sounded like a good place. The guards went on and on about how peaceful the woodlanders who lived in it were. Then one of them said "He'll probably start after he's finished this lot off." Suddenly she made up her mind. She must find Redwall and warn them of the danger. But she had no idea where it was! First she must get out of the vermin camp.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale:Part Five


Author:
Riverstream Wildlough
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Date Posted: 23:51:14 09/11/07 Tue

As quickly as she could she climbed up the walls to the window. When she got there she did not have much trouble getting out. The rock had smashed all the bars completely through. The next step was getting out of the vermin camp. She waited, standing in the shadows. When she saw her chance she grabbed it, darting behind the slave pens. While she was hurrying along, she heard part of a conversation between two of Goldenblade's guards that had dropped out of the fight. "I thought ol' Goldenblade said that'n we was going to capture Redwall.""Nah" said the other, "he'd rather be fightin' Badclaw's bunch." Redwall! Redwall! She repeated it over and over again. It sounded like a good place. The guards went on and on about how peaceful the woodlanders who lived in it were. Then one of them said "He'll probably start after he's finished this lot off." Suddenly she made up her mind. She must find Redwall and warn them of the danger. But she had no idea where it was! First she must get out of the vermin camp.

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #2: Phil


Author:
Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 18:06:54 09/11/07 Tue

I heard the dawn gongs sound, and as I woke up, my first thoughts went to Terry, my younger brother. I had been at LP School for two years now, and I knew exactly how it felt on your first day. Horrible. And for Terry, it was even worse, what with his name. The Drill Sergeants picked on the first-years, and everyone was especially strict with them, to 'get them into shape'. I knew how sensitive Terry was, and I didn't think it would be long before it all overwhelmed him and he just refused to go.

I had an awful nickname, 'Chloro-Phil', because I loved plants and nature so much, but it was all meant in good jest, so I didn't let it bother me; it wasn't meant to hurt. Neither were the jokes about 'Terrible', but Terry couldn't manage it like me. I was the only beast who could see him for what he truly was; a very scared leveret, desperate to live down his name, prepared to do anything to get some reputation. It wasn't going to work at school, and he would be in big trouble soon enough, but I was determined to give him a good life at the school. That started with waking him and turfing him out of bed. He wouldn't thank me for it at the time, I knew, but he would soon realise what would have happened if he'd been late. Someone always was, and this year, it was not going to be my brother. Not if I could help it. I had to do something for him - no-one else was going to.

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Subject: Oops.


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Samkin
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Date Posted: 23:50:03 09/10/07 Mon

I forgot some details. The orangish light angled inward and outward starting from the edges of the perfect circle, and the scarlet beams of light go straight out from the shield and do not angle at all, unlike the orange toungues of colored light.

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Subject: This is a description of a shield and other details around it that I plan on using in a book I'm writing.


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Samkin
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Date Posted: 23:46:57 09/10/07 Mon

Every person in the Craftall family was a master at something. Carpentry, authorship, cooking, etc. etc. The list of things some twig in the family tree has mastered goes on for quite some time. Terronall Alember Craftall was a master forger. H had made a wondrous shield to aid Simrar in his quest.
The shield had a golden star in the centre. A faint yellowish light came off the points, and angled inward with an orangish color when it reflected off one of the five rubies embossed around the perfectly symmetrical circle. The orange light angled outward as well as inward, so it looked like orange lasors coming off the shield and all the seperate beams meeting a good two or three feet out from the shield's centre, while the steady, scarlet beams of light that emanated from the rubies--there were five of them, one for each point--continued onward into the air until stopped by a non-transparent source. You could see through the orange beams fairly well, though naturally everything you saw through it was orange, while the red beams stood unwavering, unable to see anything but a rough outling of shapes through its brilliant red gaze. Of course, one had to catch the shield at just the right angle to the sun to get the pillars of colored light. The straps to hold it on the arm were a fine, black leather, with a dagger hidden in a secret sheath on the part of the shield that you never seemed to see.
To describe the dagger as pretty would have been a gross understatement. Its hilt was wrapped in dark, fine, black silk, with an emerald pommel stone and radiant purplish stones on the other hilt points. It was double-bladed, with a steel blood channel and a fine Toledo blade. It had an icy tip sharp as fire, cold as a blizzard, and though made for only death, it was terribly beautiful.

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Subject: A Dark Prophecy 7


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 22:07:23 09/10/07 Mon

Small Tim was a ferret. He was fast and agile, quicker than any other beast in the land, but he didn't have a long endurance over flat ground; hills and forests were preferred to open plains, as well as mountains and long-abandoned tunnels. Plains simply didn't have the appropriate cover and mystery to suit him. However, none of his skill or hidden strength helped him when the vermin came.
They sailed from a far-away land on ships; he watched them arrive from a tall dune, sheltered by a sand-covered cloak. As the seasons went by they established a firm hold, conquering Redwall and ruling Mossflower. He hated seeing good-beasts enslaved, for he himself was not evil. But he could do nothing, so he continued with life as always.
Until a time almost eleven seasons later, when he was no longer a small dibbun. Now he had reached seventeen seasons and was still small, thin and short, looking much younger than he actually was. He was sighing over this early one morning when he heard a twig snap nearby. Leaping from his seat among the roots of an oak, he whirled around and darted for a low branch, hoping to lose the foes by escaping into the treetops.
It didn't work. Fast as he was, they had closed in too far and he was grabbed by the footpaw just before he could pull himself up. A strong weasel had caught him and now jerked him back down, holding a dagger to his throat.
"Well well, what have we here," the weasel chuckled. "A little woodlander panicked by us. That's down-right insulting, don't you think?" His companions, five other assorted vermin, grinned and drew their weapons, a few licking their blades in anticipation. Tim gulped.
"Don't worry, little woodlander, we won't hurt you. At least, not if your mommy and daddy come out nice and easy like and let us take them back to Juntil's fort." A few of the vermin laughed, and Tim drew himself straighter. Even so, he still didn't reach the weasel's shoulder.
"I'm not a woodlander and I don't have any parents." Wonder of wonders, his voice seemed to be steady. Inside, he felt like he had swallowed a mountain full of butterflies. "In fact, I'm a lot older than you think." Some stared at him incredulously, but the weasel only pressed his knife closer. "Clever little fellow, aren't you? Well don't worry, Juntil will soon decide what to do with you." Tim bit back a groan. His brother was the last beast he wanted to see right now.


Rose smiled at the young hare serving her and he practically skipped away, a silly grin pasted on his face. Sam grinned and leaned toward her, whispering, "His face looks like he got kissed instead of smiled at, eh, Rose?" She blushed.
"Oh, be quiet, you lop-eared excuse for a squirrel. Bury your face in that soup before I bury it in the sand!"
A pace-stick rapped the table in front of them, causing them to start with surprise. In front of them was an old hare squinting through his monocle. "Come on, missy, let's here a song from you. Young Sam says you could charm the stars out of the sky with your singing, and we all want to see if he's a rotten face liar or not, wot wot!"
Shooting Sam a murderous glance, Rose stood up and complied.

"Sun rises o’er the treetops,
And sends us day’s first welcome,
Shining down upon ripe crops,
And burning mist away.
It lends the strength to fight night’s fears,
And dispels all damp and gloom,
It wipes away little ones’ tears,
With each and every ray.
So come now, young one, watch the sun,
As it brings good cheer and faith,
Forever smiling ‘till it’s gone,
And burning through the day."

For a moment after she finished the song, all was hushed silent. Then the Long Patrol broke out in hearty cheers. Sam grinned and waved a paw at the hares. "Come on, Rosey, you have to give into that. Sing us another one!" With much coaxing, Rose finally relented and began an old favorite of hers, singing cheerily,

"'Twas on midwinter's eve,
That I joined the Long Patrol,
And soon I learned to my dismay,
That they didn't have so much as a hardtack roll!
They starved an' fought an' starved some more,
Then cooked fat trees for lunch,
An' ran as far ole Redwall,
To beg for something to munch.
See, the corporal was the cook as well,
But he burned all of their salad,
And toasts grit for them to drink,
Even as I sing this ballad.
The sergeant roared to toss the soup,
Right at the foebeasts faces,
An' they gave way to the purple liquid,
Before we took three paces!
So the Long Patrol do not join,
I warn you all right now,
For once begun you cannot stop,
And the scoff is awful foul.
We march until our paws drop off,
An' watch the green sun rise,
An' every night the captain sings,
So shrill it hurts our eyes!
Stay home and feast, I tell you sure,
Do not come to join us,
The cook bakes like a thrice-dead stone,
An' the dust does like to coat us."

Amid the laughter and chuckles, Rose sat down, but only after hitting her squirrel friend with an onion and garlic flan.

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Subject: Check


Author:
Hermes
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Date Posted: 14:01:09 09/09/07 Sun

Checkpoint!

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Subject: Glothen’s reign chapter 1


Author:
swordling of the GG
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Date Posted: 01:57:00 09/09/07 Sun

The summer sun shown down peacefully upon Redwall Abby. It was early afternoon, the lunch had been served and eaten long ago. All who had no immediate duties to attend to were lying about in the soft warm grass, passing the day away in luxurious bliss. Yet there was one who was not feeling the warmth of the sun or the drowsiness of the day. Ma Mellus was looking for someone.

“Swordling, Swordling.” she called for what felt like the hundredth time. “Where is that little mouse Swordling?”

She sighed in frustration. Then she spied two dibbuns sitting by the pond. One of them was the hare Lettuceleaf Horatio; the other the squirrel Mossyra. Both dibbuns were talking in hushed tones, their heads close together.

The badger mum smiled. She quickly rushed up to them, noting their guilty countenances. “Have either of you seen Swordling?” she inquired suspiciously.

Lettuceleaf shook his head, “No mum, not since this morning at breakfast.”


Mossyra gave Ma Mellus a face that was the picture of innocence, “Why did you want to know?”

“None of your business.” the badger snapped, but Mossyra saw the towel over her arm and knew she was looking for Swordling to bath her. She gulped. If only they could keep it secret.

“I’ll tell you where Swordling is.” Jakken Swiftpaw the hare dibbun said as he walked casually over. “She said her nose was brothering her so she and Samkin went into Mossflower to find out what was wrong.”

“Jakken” Mossyra leaped up outraged. “How could you? We promised we wouldn’t tell!”

Lettuceleaf leaped up as well. He could see that Mossyra was about to attack Jakken, so he laid his paw on her shoulder keep her from doing so.

The badger ignored the young squirrel’s anger and turned to Jakken. “What do you mean her nose was bothering her?”

Jakken flopped lazily down and stared at the calm surface of the pond. “Hmm? Oh yes her nose always twitches and stuff when there’s vermin about, or something’s not right She must have found some by now.”

Ma Mellus threw her hands up in despair. “Great she’s done it again. I must have told her over and over to stay away from vermin, but does she listen? No, of course not, why should anyone listen to me?!”

Skipper the otter was just going to take a quick dive in the pond when he saw Ma Mellu’s fit of rage and decided to investigate.

“Hold on there ma’am. What seams to be the trouble?”

Ma Mellus breathed a sigh of relief. “Skipper, just the beast I was looking for. Swordling and Samkin are out in the woods looking for vermin. Could you go out and find them?”

Skipper gave a false wince to try to lighten the situation up a bit “The double S’s. You’ve got trouble if you’ve got them. Don’t you worry I’ll find them in a flash,” and with that the otter headed toward the gate.

The badge mom, satisfied that the missing dibbuns would soon be found, turned in search of some one else to torture.

Skipper was about half way through the gate when he heard a loud splash. He turned surprised to see two dibbuns standing by the water, with the smallest hare spluttering with rage as he floundered about in the pond.
Skipper smiled and shook his head. Dibbuns and there games. He turned and disappeared through the gate.


Swordling stood up straighter as she reached the top of the small hill. Her nose was twitching visibly now. Slowly she tilted her head up and stared sniffing, turning slowly in a circle. She muttered quietly to herself as she let her nose erupt with all the smells and feelings of Mossflower. After a minute she smiled triumphantly and pointed with her right paw.

“They’re that way!” she said, joy evident on her face.

Samkin looked doubtfully the way she was pointing. “Are you sure ‘Ordsling?” He asked his squirrel voce taking on a rather winy sound at the thought of more marching.

Swordling laughed softly at Samkin’s nick name for her then became serous once more. “Yes, I’m sure we’re almost there.”

Samkin sighed. “You’ve been saying that for the past two hours. Can’t we hunt for vermin another time?”

Swordling turned and looked down at the inpatient squirrel. How was she supposed to explain this?

“Oh Samkin, this is more then just looking for vermin! Something is wrong, I know it. Please just trust me.”

Samkin gave Swordling a playful shove. “Course I trust you. Very well then, if we must follow your nose then I will follow it.”

Swordling stared walking casually with Samkin behind her. Every now and then she’d stop and sniffed the air to confirm that they were headed the right way.

Samkin was rather board he yawned and plodded after Swordling, not really paying any attention to where he was going. This is why he nearly walked into Swordling’s back when she stopped suddenly.

“’Ordsling, what is it?”

Swordling put up a warning paw “Shhhhh, listen.”

Samkin rolled his eyes, but obliged never the less. He pricked his ears up, trying to hear anything unusual. He was just about to give up and tell Swordling that they should head back to Redwall when he heard it, a faint sound of raised voices and shuffling.

His throat tightened and his heart began to pulse with excitement. “Vermin?”

Swordling nodded. Then she grabbed his arm and pulled him down. Putting a warning paw to her lips she began to crawl slowly forward. Together they pushed their way through the tick foliage.

At one point Swordling the caught the hem of her cloak on a branch. Samkin was able to reach up and unhook it without causing much noise, and they pressed forward. Suddenly Swordling stopped and motioned to Samkin. The squirrel pulled himself up beside her and his eyes widened with fright as he took in the scene in front of him.

“Vermin!” was the first thought that slammed into his confused mind. Score after score of them were crowed around in a huge circle with two vermin standing in the midst of them.

Though one of the two vermin was just your average sea rat, without must unusually about him, the larger, more foreboding of the two caught Samkin’s attention. It was one of the biggest weasels he had ever seen, with sliver fir and yellow eyes. It stood before the terrified sea rat then raised his voce to a roar, a harsh, grating voice that chilled Samkin to the bone.

“Well!” it hissed “You all heard what Gruffer said.” Gruffer, Samkin guessed, must be the rat. “He called me a shiny worm, didn’t you Gruffer? Said I couldn’t take over any old abbey even if its defenders laid down at my feet, didn’t you!?”

Gruffer could only whimper in fear.

“No one makes fun at the expense of Glothen Singledeath!” With a blood stopping shriek the weasel pulled forth two Bangkok swords. It was over in seconds Gruffer squealed in pain, and then disappeared in a blur of tag dust. Glothen laughed cruelly while spreading his arms wide, showing to all the tag dust-stained blades. “Who rules all!?” he demanded from the onlookers.

The answer was load and clear. “Glothen, Glothen Singledeath Glothen, Glothen!!!”

Swordling shook Samkin gently. He turned, startled. She inclined her head, signaling they should go. Slowly the pair began backing out of the bushes that were concealing them.

Samkin fought to keep from bolting away. Fear welded up inside him until he thought it would burst through and leave him exploding in sheer pain, but Swordling helped him out and soon they were safely away from the hideous hoard. Once out of the foliage, they both jumped to their feet and ran. The one thought that was burned into their minds was that they had to get to Redwall to warn the others.

They ran and ran, driven on by fear. Suddenly a figure stepped out in front of their path. “Whoa! Slow down there little mates.”
Before she knew what she was doing, Swordling leaped onto the figure, clawing and tearing at him, knocking him over.

Then Samkin recognized the otter. “ ‘Ordsling stop, its Skipper! Stop!”

Dazed, Swordling climbed off the otter chieftain. Skipper leaped up and brushed off his tunic front.

“Swordling! My goodness, you do know how to attack a beast.” He stopped short when he saw their faces. “What’s wrong? You both looked as if you’ve seen a ghost.”

Slowly, haltingly, Swordling and Samkin told Skipper what they had seen in the clearing. It took a while for the otter to get the whole story, but as soon as he had it he immediately hoped it wasn’t true.

“Show me.” He whispered hoarsely.

So Swordling and Samkin lead him to the foot of the bushes where they had crawled through only shortly before. Skipper told them to wait where they were, which they were only too willing to do.

The otter ducked down and crawled trough the bushes.

To the two, dibbuns it seemed like hours before the otter was back, though it was only a few minutes. His face was graven and ashen. “Come on we need to get back to Redwall.”

So, slowly, the three abbey dwellers made there way through Mossflower, fear digging into their hearts with every step. It was clear what Glothen meant to do. He was going to capture Redwall.

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Subject: War for Mossflower-part 4


Author:
Sky Songsword of the Newbies
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Date Posted: 22:58:28 09/08/07 Sat

Sunstreak peered through the branches at the vermin camp. There were about ten of them, huddled around the campfire. Near the middle of the camp, tied to a tree, was a young hare. The young badger could smell the vermin's reek fouling the salt air. He began to creep backwards, when he stepped on a twig. A quiet but sharp crack filled the air. The rats looked, alerted, and one of them spotted Sunstreak hunched in the brush.
"There! A stripedog! Get 'im!" They leaped up, drawing weapons. Sunstreak growled in dismay and raced away. Looking backwards, he tripped as the rats came closer.
Oh well, whats the harm? Sunstreak thought, and hurled himself onto the rats. Lashing out with tooth and claws, he heard one of the rats shriek in pain. Another managed to get hobbles around his paws paws, and they lugged him back to the camp. The rat that he presumed was their leader leered at him.
"A stripedog, eh?" He turned to the other rats. "Tie 'im up wid the rabbit." The hare tied to the tree piped up. "Actually I'm a hare, you rat chaps, not a rabbit, wot." One of the rats whacked him over the head. "Shurrup, rabbit." Sunstreak was hustled over to the tree and tied up next to the hare.
After the rats had sat back down, Sunstreak whispered to the hare, "I'm Sunstreak. What's your name?" The hare twisted his paws around so that Sunstreak could see that one of the pads of his front paws was sort of silvery coloured. "I'm Silverpaw."

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Subject: Checkpoint


Author:
Hermes
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Date Posted: 21:28:31 09/08/07 Sat

Checkpoint!

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Subject: A Tale of Two Brothers #1: Terry


Author:
Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 18:19:53 09/08/07 Sat

I huddled deeper into my bedclothes, afraid of what I knew was coming. I could hear the dawn gongs sounding, but I scrunched my ears up and chose to ignore the din. Nothing could prepare me for this. It was the start of my Long Patrol school career.
I knew what was going to happen already. It was inevitable. My name, you see, was Terrible. Terrible Cunningham. Phil, my brother, always introduced me as Terry, and that was the way I liked it. But today, my name was on the register. My full name.
Things had happened before. Snide comments from the other leverets, as I sat with my ears drooping in the mess hall. Even the supposedly sensible adults couldn't resist a jibe. "Terrible by name, terrible by nature," they'd say. That particular joke always stung. Mainly because it was so untrue. I was hard-working and polite - far from terrible, even if I did enjoy sparring and fighting.
I still curse my parents for giving me that awful name. They were eccentric, scholarly folk, immersed in their studies. "'Terrible' means 'wise' in the ancient language!" they would exclaim excitedly whenever I complained about it. I didn't care what it meant in some stupid, has-been old tongue that no-one could even understand. In plain Salamandastronian, it meant 'terrible'. And that was what mattered.

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Subject: Checkpoint


Author:
Hermes
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Date Posted: 13:02:04 09/08/07 Sat


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Subject: The Abbey Attics: Part One


Author:
Geminya of AA
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Date Posted: 21:09:03 09/07/07 Fri

Geminya and Kaylar Streamrudder were the best of friends. When one did something, so did the other. They were inseparable.

So when Geminya suggested that they check out the Abbey's attics, Kaylar wasn't going to say no.

They sneaked up the stairs from the dormitory to the first level of attics. There was an abandoned sitting room and a room full of books there. The two spent a few hours exploring these rooms then moved on to the next level.

On that level, the two friends started to race across a great low ceilinged room. The room reminded them of the Great Hall, but slightly more dibbun sized. On the other end of the room, there was a door. The duo found a staircase that was pretty sturdy and started to climb it. At the top was a door, and behind that door was a room perfect for creating a new club in.

For a while these two friends had been feeling out of place among the creatures their own age. Geminya loved to read and Kaylar was an aspiring cook. The maids were fonder of elder activities, but wouldn't tell the elders anything about the other dibbuns plans. Even so the other dibbuns didn't trust the two friends. So they were willing to start a new club.

Bringing up furniture from the rest of the attic, the two maids made it a comfortable haven. One wall held shelves with all sorts of books for Geminya and another corner held and old brazier that Kaylar could use for cooking. There were a few beds in one corner and the corner by the door was occupied by squishy armchairs to sit in.

The two maids named this group The Abbey Attics or TAA for short. They would sneak up to the top attics for comfort when things got rough and soon invited other misfit dibbuns to join them. All was well until a well meaning elder discovered the group one snowy evening. Then all the furniture was returned to its former places and the dibbuns were forbidden to return to the attic.

The other dibbuns saw the forming of this group as a rebellion and did not except the two maids back into the main body. After hearing about what had occured, Kaylars parents decided it would be wise to take Kaylar back to their holt in Mossflower Woods. Geminya stood on the walltops waving goodbye to her one true friend, Kaylar Streamrudder.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale:Part four


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Date Posted: 23:43:46 09/06/07 Thu

They parried each other's thrust. Several times this happened. They battled on slash for cut, nick for clip. Being the more skillfull of the two, Goldenblade was in the lead. Suddenly, Badclaw made as if to charge, but at the last moment sidestepped. Goldenblade was ready. Badclaw, having sidestepped so fast had taken the scimitar his opponent was holding out straight in the stomache! He fell to the ground, trying to pull the blade out of himself. His last words were "stones away!". He fell back dying. Slingstones began rattling in from his vermin. She watched in amazement as one extra large stone came hurtling through and smashed the bars on the window at the top of her cell. Goldenblade lay on the ground trying to catch his breath. All the vermin broke out fighting. She took this moment to make her escape.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale:Part four


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Date Posted: 23:42:46 09/06/07 Thu

They parried each other's thrust. Several times this happened. They battled on slash for cut, nick for clip. Being the more skillfull of the two, Goldenblade was in the lead. Suddenly, Badclaw made as if to charge, but at the last moment sidestepped. Goldenblade was ready. Badclaw, having sidestepped so fast had taken the scimitar his opponent was holding out straight in the stomache! He fell to the ground, trying to pull the blade out of himself. His last words were "stones away!". He fell back dying. Slingstones began rattling in from his vermin. She watched in amazement as one extra large stone came hurtling through and smashed the bars on the window at the top of her cell. Goldenblade lay on the ground trying to catch his breath. All the vermin broke out fighting. She took this moment to make her escape.

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Subject: Check


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Date Posted: 21:38:33 09/06/07 Thu

As the title says. Checkpoint.

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Subject: Checkpoint


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Hermes
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Date Posted: 22:25:31 09/05/07 Wed

Checkpoint. Swordling, please watch your grammar.

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Subject: Glothen’s reign prologue.


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Date Posted: 16:34:00 09/05/07 Wed

The tide came in. its waves set upon a familiar path towards the western shore of Mossflower, but something was different its path was changed. The waves had to change there well marked plan and move around two large ships. The waves paid little heed to this new obstacles and counted on there way. The ships meant nothing to them. Little did they know that the ships were very important.
The two vessels let there anchors down. They had passed the mountain of the badger lord during the night. So as not to be detected by its inhabitance. Heading further north before setting down. The fire mountain would be dealt with later, but not yet.
Aboard the largest vessel a large silver weasel was calmly surveying the shore from his ship. His eyes were a bright glowing yellow and he only had one ear. A single large fang grew down from his upper jaw giving him a rather menacing appearance. One his broad backs were strapped two Bangkok swords witch he knew how to use. This terrifying menace was called Glothen Singledeath, and no beast dared stand against him.
A small smile flickered its way across Glothen’s cold features. He had come for Mossflower. All of Mossflower, But first he would start with Redwall. Yes Redwall that lazy bent up Abby. It would be the center of his new kingdom. Then he would take Salamandastron. Then slowly he would spread like a plague. Burning his way till he was ruler of all her surveyed.
Glothen stepped lightly into a simple row boat. He was quickly rowed ashore he didn’t care who was rowing he didn’t even look. Glothen leaped off the boat to land perfectly balanced. His smile now gone he shouted out orders. Soon he thought soon Redwall would be his.

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Subject: Checkpoint


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Hermes
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Date Posted: 23:34:02 09/03/07 Mon

This is an official... checkpoint!

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Subject: A Dark Prophecy 6


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Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 20:21:12 09/03/07 Mon

Whitestripe Shortblade calmly drew his raiper and eyed the three vermin in front of him. They were holding nicked cutlasses and smiling eagerly, doubtless thinking he was to be taken easily.
"Well, chaps, you appear to be blocking my path. You'd do well to move, wot wot."
One of the vermin snickered. "Don't he talk nice? Can I carve his throat for 'im?" Another, a weasel, shook his head and sneered, "Naw. This 'un 'ill give us some sport before he dies." The others grinned and Whitestripe gave a brief sigh. If the fools thought he was going to go without a fight, they were dead already.
The only warning he had was the quiet rustle from behind and a soft whirring sound.
Whitestripe threw himself to the ground and rolled to the left, sheathing his raiper and drawing a dagger as he leapt up.
Where he had been mere moments before were two arrows and a small dart, probably poisoned. The weasel was lying dead on the ground, a stone potruding from his head and a surprised expression on his face. They had really thought to kill him quickly. Then he recognized the curved red sword stitched into the left shoulder of the dead vermin's tunic and he realized that Juntil was looking for hares from Salamandastron so he could interrogate them. The weapons intended for him had come from somewhere else.
turning quickly, he melted into the forest and searched for the attackers, the other foes forgotten for the moment.


Martin hauled a large stone across the half-finished courtyard and placed it with the rest before turning back wearily. His resolution hadn't faded in the slightest, but he could find no way to harm the enemies. The rest of the slaves were totally cowed and followed orders unquestioningly, unwilling to risk themselves by gathering defiance. He was on his own.
The past few weeks had been harsh and unforgiving. After arriving at the wooden fort of the vermin, he and his fellow captives had been put to work in the quarry, carrying rocks into the fortress and leaving them to be worked and fitted by yet more slaves. The buiding was now in the final stages of construction, with only the walls and courtyard to finish. In less than a week the vermin would be permanently established and all chance of escape gone. It had to be done tonight.
He wasn't sure how he would do it without the support of the others, but he was determined to do it and it was a now-or-never scenerio. Once they had a firm hold on the surrounding land, they wouldn't give up an inch or let anyone get away. So he began to persuade the slaves in his own way.
Martin wasn't a forceful speaker, but he had an idea they all dreamed about and a steadfast will to carry it out. That alone was his weapon, for it came from deep within the heart and nothing could waver his opinion.
So, he set to work by talking, seemingly to himself, about what freedom was like. He painted a picture of his old life, his friends and family, his home. He spoke of the horrors and joys evenly, making sure that the other slaves heard but the vermin did not. he talked of his mother and how she had been injured, how his father had been killed protecting their shores, how Dan had fought with him, though both were hardly more than Dibbuns. He spoke of fighting for freedom, and the others began bto understand. Hope revived and soared; smiles broke out where there had been none and laughter where there had been sorrow. He was getting to them.
Noon came and went as they worked, the sun beating down on their unprotected heads, but he brought back previously forgotten joy as he spoke of childhood games and harvests. They understood his message, of course, and replied with nods and smiles, determined to be free or die trying. Twilight was rapidly approaching and they began to prepare themselves, working out what to do in low voices. In a single day he had accomplished the impossible, rekindling hope and beating back doubt.
Then the hare appeared.


Rose staggered and almost fell when the ground shifted in front of her. they had been trekking all day across the sands and she was weary, long since exhausting the last of their water.
Now, the very ground beneath her paws moved and revealed a hare coated liberally with sand. He peered up at them curiously, obviously annoyed, and asked, "Wot ho, chaps, do you mind not stepping on a body while he's scanning the bloomin' countryside, wot wot? Rather bad form, doncha know." Rose stared at him in amazement and replied hesitantly, "Er, sorry, but what are you doing here?" The hare chuckled. "Scouting, of course. The bally vermin are always on the move and we want to know when they're in range." Sam interceeded at this point, adopting the hare accent easily and imitating his mannerism. "Scouting for who, old lad? There's nothin' in this bloomin' wasteland but sand, sand and more sand, wot wot!" The hare chuckled again. "No need to get cheeky, sirrah. I'm scouting out the way for the Long Patrol and co, ya see, making sure the flamin' foe don't steal a march on us. Capital camouflage, sand, hides just about anything. There's plenty out here, ya just don't see it. By an' by, me name's Jangur. And you?" Rose smiled beautifully and shook the proferred paw, explaining, "I'm Rose and this pestilence is Sam. We're searching for my brother because he's been taking by vermin. Can you help us?" Jangur nodded, standing up, and replied, "'Course I can, old gal. Simple as knockin' two gourds together. Hang on a tick, I'll signal the Patrol." Saying this, he brought out a shell and blew into it, producing a single, clear note. A distant reply came and they watched in awe as the Long Patrol appeared on the horizon, marching at double pace as they came onward.

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Subject: Riverstream's Tale :Part one


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Riverstream Wildlough AA
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Date Posted: 19:34:02 09/03/07 Mon

She peered through the tiny barred window in the corner of her cell watching as night fell.A huge sigh heaved through her body.It had been a season since the vermin had attacked her village.She had been so young that she could hardly remember anything.What she did remember haunted her.Slaughtering,Killing and all those leering faces.A ferret sentry padded by,not even glancing at her.She was startled out of her thoughts by a loud shout.Commotion broke out among the vermin.She was about to find out about what would happen next!

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Subject: Check


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Hermes
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Date Posted: 14:41:20 09/03/07 Mon

Thanks, Sky. Checkpoint.

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Subject: Oops!


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Sky Songsword of the Newbies
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Date Posted: 03:14:00 09/03/07 Mon

I'm sorry that I didn't post my dorm. I wasn't logged in and I forgot. It's Newbie.

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Subject: War for Mossflower-Part 3


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Sky Songsword
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Date Posted: 03:04:22 09/03/07 Mon

Silverpaw bowed before Lord Broadstripe. “Lord, the searats have sailed away with no traces.”
Broadstripe was an old badger, but in his youth he had been a great fighter, and he had a good intuition. “I don’t like it.” He said. “Redclaw Bloodtooth made it clear that he wanted to take over Salamandastron.
Sliverpaw snorted. “Like he could, old chap, wot wot. Wot…” His enthusiasm evaporated as Lord Broadstripe remained silent. “You don’t think he could, sir, do you?” He was aghast. Broadstripe offered him a rare, but worried, smile. “No, Silverpaw, he couldn’t. It’s his disappearance that’s worrying me. If he doesn’t try for Salamandastron, he might go for somewhere else, like Redwall Abbey.” He turned back to the window and looked out. “Silverpaw, I want you to scout around the coast for them.”
“Yes sir, scout around, send em’ packing, wot wot!” The eager young hare bounded out the door. Heading towards the kitchens. Broadstripe shook his head slightly, keeping his eyes on the horizen. Trouble was in the air.


The young otter’s head throbbed. His torso throbbed. In fact, his whole body throbbed. Soft voices filled the air around him. He slowly opened his eyes. He was in a small cave. Two bankvoles were the only other occupants. One of them bustled over and spooned some soup into his mouth. He gulped it down hungrily. “Well, you’ve woken at last. Who are you, anyway?”
“I can’t remember…” He mumbled.
“We rescued you from a flooded river, and you had lots of wounds on you. We’ve healed them by the way. Does that help?” The otter nodded as his memory returned.
“My name is Keroan.” He said. “Me and Ariann, Ariann and I…” Keroan stopped and licked his lips. They were dry. “We were fighting off Serano’s army.”
The bankvole by the fire gasped. “Just the two of ye? The murderous cat’s army?”
The otter nodded. “Ariann was captured. The last I saw of her she was being surrounded. You said that my wounds are healed?” Both bankvoles nodded. Keroan stood up. “Then I must go. Thank you my friends, for everything you’ve done for me, but I must search until I find my friend.” With that the otter turned and left, leaving the two bankvoles alone. The second bankvole leaned back in his chair and sighed.
“Now, will ye look at that. ‘E didn’t even stay for supper.”

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Subject: Checkpoint


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Date Posted: 02:36:33 09/03/07 Mon

Checkpoint. Sky Songsword, please post your dorm or you won't get paid.

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Subject: War for Mossflower-Part 2


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Sky Songsword
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Date Posted: 02:07:37 09/03/07 Mon

Ariann awoke, her head pounding. She groaned as she sat up, her side a mass of pain. Opening her eyes, she looked around. Taking in the stone walls and floor of the tiny cell she was in, the events of the previous night came rushing back to her. She rammed into the sturdy wooden door. “Let me out, d’you hear? You have no right to imprison me! Let me out!” There was no answer. She collapsed on the ground as she remembered. “Keroan…” Her friend, the best and only one was gone, most likely dead. His head had disappeared under the rushing water, and even though he was an otter she doubted that anyone could survive the flooded river.
She felt her head. The squirrel’s paw came in contact with dried blood and a large bump on her skull. She then reached over her shoulder and encountered nothing. The vermin had taken her bow and quiver of arrows as well. They’ve grown smarter since the last time they captured me, she thought. If only I could get out of here, I’d make Serano pay.
She quickly lay down again, bushy tail wrapped over her eyes as the door creaked open. A weasel guard, one she recognized as Fleafur, entered the room.
“Ya can’t fool me, missy, I heard ya yellin’ in there.” He cackled. He kicked at the prone squirrel, and Ariann moved like chain lightning. Her head snaked out and she bit his footpaw, drawing blood. Fleafur drew back swiftly and sucked at his paw. Glaring at the young squirrelmaid, he drew a short dagger. “Think yer clever, doncha, brushtail? Well, I’ll make you scream loud for that!” The weasel lunged forwards, only to be stopped in his tracks by a smooth, cold voice from the doorway. “Now, now, Fleafur, we want to give our…guest all hospitality.” A large wildcat stalked in, decked out in a dark purple cloak and a spiked helmet. Ariann had stood, and the wildcat stopped short. His eyes traveled over the ripped green tunic, dark brown fur, to the defiant green eyes. Odd for a squirrel, he thought. But then he recognized the jagged scar on her right shoulder and gasped.
Ariann sighed inwardly. From the moment he had gasped she knew that he realized who she was.
“Hello, Serano.” She said.

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Subject: A Dark Prophecy 5


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 02:07:09 09/03/07 Mon

Martin felt numb for many of the long days afterward. He had lost his family, his tribe, his home, his freedom. But worst of all, he had lost Dan, his best friend in the whole world, the one that had comforted him when his mother lay near death, the one that had cheered him up when he was sad and had played with him when he had nothing to do. Dan was gone now. For such a long time he couldn't seem to think. Then, as the vermin pulled their slave lines behind them, he awoke.
It happened when a small squirrel and a young mouse were spotted up ahead. Unaware of the foes, the pair walked cheerfully across the beach--straight into the deadly trap.
The vermin collapsed a dune on the duo. One, the squirrel, lay ominously still, but the other struggled feebly, near unconscious. He was dug out and chained with the rest before they started marching again, heading for a fortress at the edge of the trees. As he looked back at the unmoving squirrel, Martin felt a slow, smoldering anger build in him. A strange taste was in his mouth and a single-minded goal appeared before him: To give justice to these heartless enemies of the land. One day he would give them what they deserved, and that day was coming rapidly closer.

Rose found the tracks first, but Sam recognized them.
"Vermin," he said thoughtfully. "Looks like weasels, stoats, ferrets and rats, but no foxes. They've got slaves with them, poor beasts. Your brother's probably been captured, Rosey." Rose sighed. "I should've known. It's just like him to get in that sort of trouble."
As they conversed, neither noticed the silent eyes watching them, nor the quiet rustles getting gradually closer.

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Subject: The Prophecy-War for Mossflower part 1


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Sky Songsword
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Date Posted: 23:53:47 09/02/07 Sun

Descended from the squirrel queen of old
The one to vanquish the evil one comes
Thrice she will be caught
Thrice she will escape
The evil one who shadows our land
Knows naught an apposer
Come forth, ye five
Sword bearer, perilous one, badger lord, defiant one
And Archer
Descended from the squirrel queen of old
Come forth and fight!

The vermin army swept through Mossflower, inflicting pain, cruelty, and death on the inhabitants. They attacked peaceful woodlander, enslaving and killing them. The army was composed of rats, ferrets, weasels, stoats, and foxes. But it was led by a wildcat, the only one seen in Mossflower since the time of the great war, so long ago. His name was Serano.
Rosethorn stared ahead, numb with shock, as she was led past the burnt dwellings of the village. Serano’s army had attacked without warning. Now only she was left of her family. She felt so alone. How could she, a young mousemaid do anything? But she new one thing: she would escape, and stop Serano’s bloody rule. Anger bubbled up inside her. A whip lashed across her back. She flinched.
“Come on, look alive, make way for the great Serano!”
The wildcat prowled down the line of slaves, pacing back and forth, his tail lashing. He growled. “You are my slaves now. If I say eat, you eat, if I say starve, you’ll starve. If I say that you may live, you will be kept alive. It I think that you should die, I will make sure that you do not survive.” His voice was cold and flat. “ Take them away.” As the slaves were dragged past him, he noticed a mousemaid staring at him with burning eyes. It was he who looked away first. Rosethorn smiled grimly. It had only just begun.

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Subject: Samkin...


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Date Posted: 02:25:49 09/02/07 Sun

Samkin...

You got lucky this time, but next time please post your dorm.

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Subject: Check


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Date Posted: 23:03:09 09/01/07 Sat

Checkpoint! Remember to put your dorm, or you won't get paid!

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Subject: Checkpoint


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Hermes
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Date Posted: 16:52:59 09/01/07 Sat

Hello, everyone! I am the new updater. Chekpoint goes up to Mossyra's Tale, Part 10. I shall grade the rest later.

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Subject: new hope comes


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Date Posted: 17:59:08 08/24/07 Fri


This is a funeral song for the ones that lost their life for Redwall

There are words that can be spoken
Things that can be said
But for those who harts are broken
Whose souls feel dead.
There is no relief
From this eternal grief
Threw pain and strife
They lost there life
Yet there names will live on
There memories sing
Till the burning dawn
New hope shall bring

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Subject: for redwall i stand


Author:
swordling of the GG (embarrassed)
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Date Posted: 17:52:24 08/24/07 Fri

I sort of imagine this as some kind of oath a Redwall warrior would make to martin.



For Redwall I stand
For Redwall I live
For Redwall my life, I’ll gladly give

Oh brave Martin
I’ll weld your sword,
And with it defeat many a vermin lord

When vermin come attacking
No champion Redwall will be lacking
With your sword in my hand
With me in command
I’ll send them all packing

No tyrant shall reign
In our Redwall
With you by my side,
They all will fall

I’ll stand true and strong
For here at Redwall
I belong

For justice I’ll stand
The warrior’s law
Is my command

Lead me as you will
Show me the way
Protect Redwall, I’ll do this day

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Subject: Redwall Crossfire - Chapter 4


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Date Posted: 21:26:43 08/22/07 Wed

Swordling was furious. Raiden and Stoakly wouldn’t let her go! She was a warrior, and after all, her father was a famous soldier. “Swordling,” Stoakly reassured her, “We understand you can fight. But you can cook and heal, like most female mice, and the others can not. If you can’t heal, Mossyra will help you out, okay?” Turning to the others, he strapped on his belt, and trotted after them. Raiden had his re-forged claymore in paw, Terragon had a dagger, and Stoakly’s cutlass was hanging loosely from his belt. The three fighters left Redwall Abbey standing side-by-side. “We should find Nicolaus and Tysharm first.” Terragon commented, her smirk directed toward Stoakly. “And that’s what we’ll do,” Finished Raiden, sheathing his claymore, “Heaven’s Judgment.” Puzzled, Stoakly inquired to the others. “Tysharm went with the others, over to St. Ninian’s, no?” Terragon nodded, and Raiden was unsure. The mouse had just joined this expedition. Heading northeast, they aimed for the old, ruined church. “Well, let’s hope the remainder of the vermin didn’t kill him.” Raiden spoke, almost negatively.

Nicolaus had heard many beasts moving around in the woods, so he parted from the rest, and luckily for Tysharm, he found what he was searching for. They were both still near the ditch, and three rats surrounded them. The mouse’s dagger was outstretched, and he pointed it at the rat. Tysharm had an arrow notched to his bow string, but the two were cornered. The rats made a triangle around them, and they were soon to come in and strike. Suddenly, they all charged. Nicolaus spun and defended the shrew from the other side, and one rat fell to the ground, an arrow piercing his chest – Tysharm hit dead on. But the other rat was soon to hit Nicolaus; the shrew turned, lifting his bow up. The rat, running too fast to turn back, hit his skull directly on the bow. It forced him to fall down in a heap, but he did not die. Nicolaus defend himself from the last rat and then spun again, pushing Tysharm at him and stabbing the rat on the ground. Tysharm dodged a swipe from the last rat, Fangblade, until Nicolaus turned back, grabbed an arrow from the shrew’s quiver, and stuck it in the forehead of the rat while his companion distracted him.

“Well, what do we have here?” Terragon laughed, her paws over her face. Stoakly grinned. “Tysharm, Nicolaus, we’re going after the vermin, they headed north and this was on our way, so here we are! Are we late?” Tysharm and Nicolaus glanced at each other, a sarcastic look on their face. “Not at all,” They said in unison. The five warriors began walking down the path, until someone yelled from behind them. “You forgot us!” An ottermaid and a badgermaid were running to them. Tinsy and Legolas both crossed their arms. “Did ye really think ye could git rid of us that easy?” Posed Legolas, and Stoakly grinned. “Sorry, I thought you were staying behind.” He looked down. “Good, you’re armed.” They all started walking down the path again, and Raiden finally yelled out. “Aha!” He bellowed. Pointing to tracks, he began following the weasel tracks northwest. “Alright, Sunset, Swordling, Tokie, and Mossyra are staying behind, right? These tracks indicate that there are half a score of them, and seven of us. We should be able to fight them off with the help of the other prisoners. But we have to do it before they reach their destination. Likely, they have a ship on the coast. We need to beat them there!”

The group had decided to refuse to sleep that night. The vermin had probably thought they weren’t being tracked, thus the leader probably had them sleep, with one guard taking duties. Raiden and Nicolaus had the front, and they both had the same plan. The camp was like a circle, and they could go in two groups and attack from the east and west. The fire was out now, but a few flickers would appear every now and then. Two beasts were held captive, tied up to a tree, but they were awake; it was a hare and a hedgehog. The hedgehog was very familiar – as a dibbun, she was the “Ringleader” of a Dibbun group they were all associated with at a young age. Coming in closer, they split up. Nicolaus went with Stoakly and Terragon to untie the beasts, and Raiden went with Tinsy, Legolas, and Tysharm to the newly formed “Leader’s Tent.” As Stoakly untied the hare silently, he finally realized who the hare was. Lettuceleaf had that twinkle in his eye when he winked, and right now, he was very happy. The guard, a ferret, was asleep, so the group could successfully destroy the place with no interruptions… This was war.

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